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Array ( [sid] => 73210 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Im the cause of my own hurt [time] => 2004-11-26 11:07:13 [hometext] => my feelings today.....though they are done no justice [bodytext] =>



We bumped into each other outside our sanctuary,
You asked me where I was going,
Almost felt like you were interested again.
You didn’t seem to want to leave or for me to walk away,
I couldn’t handle it; I wanted to be held by you.
I walked away, I didn’t want to but it was the only way.
I almost cried on my best friend because of how much it hurt to walk away.
When I came back you seemed like a different person,
Weren’t very interested in me at all.
Our two lessons together and all you said was
‘I can’t be over here; you’re both using too much pink.’
When it was time for us to leave,
You merely just waved and walked out.
No words. Not even much of a smile.
My heart just shattered,
I was so close to tears,
But no I couldn’t break down in college,
Too many people ask too many stupid questions.
I had to cry on the inside.
Now I won’t see you till Monday,
This weekend is going to be so long,
My words do no justice to how I feel.
I love you, but I have to walk away from you,
You will not commit to me,
Whether you’re scared or don’t feel the same.
Either way I have to do this,
It hurts unlike anything else, alas I fallen in love with you.
Now I hurt for such emotions…….



SJ





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Im the cause of my own hurt

Contributed by little_genna on Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 11:07:13 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove







We bumped into each other outside our sanctuary,
You asked me where I was going,
Almost felt like you were interested again.
You didn’t seem to want to leave or for me to walk away,
I couldn’t handle it; I wanted to be held by you.
I walked away, I didn’t want to but it was the only way.
I almost cried on my best friend because of how much it hurt to walk away.
When I came back you seemed like a different person,
Weren’t very interested in me at all.
Our two lessons together and all you said was
‘I can’t be over here; you’re both using too much pink.’
When it was time for us to leave,
You merely just waved and walked out.
No words. Not even much of a smile.
My heart just shattered,
I was so close to tears,
But no I couldn’t break down in college,
Too many people ask too many stupid questions.
I had to cry on the inside.
Now I won’t see you till Monday,
This weekend is going to be so long,
My words do no justice to how I feel.
I love you, but I have to walk away from you,
You will not commit to me,
Whether you’re scared or don’t feel the same.
Either way I have to do this,
It hurts unlike anything else, alas I fallen in love with you.
Now I hurt for such emotions…….



SJ









Copyright © little_genna ... [ 2004-11-26 11:07:13]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Im the cause of my own hurt (User Rating: 1 )
by Pyrofungus on Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 11:16:33 AM AEST
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bro i'm so sorry! what an ass...wonder what his reasons for all that were...do you have his #? give 'em a call...

summer


Re: Im the cause of my own hurt (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 11:23:21 AM AEST
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very sad hun, to love someone who doesn't love you back must cut so deep, I am really sorry for your pain *hugs* very emotional poem,

pixie xx


Re: Im the cause of my own hurt (User Rating: 1 )
by Doriens_Picture on Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 11:24:42 AM AEST
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hey girl this is really good and i know how it feels to have to walk away

hope to talk to you again later today




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