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I'm not the same, inside or out.
My brown hair is slowly fading black.
My peach skin is turning pale.
My pink lips, are turning black.
All because of how I act inside.
I use to be normal, then it slowly hit me like a timmid drug.
All the pain just came clear.
I knew I needed help, so I got it...
The pills made me sick, and worse then before...
Talking didn't help....
And neither did admitting...
So I've been depressed, severly for sometime....
Now I cut, and take pills to cover up the pain.....
Because in the deepest of my mind, I have no self-blame...
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Severe Depression

Contributed by addicted2selfharm on Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 12:10:59 AM in AEST
Topic: psychoticpoems

I'm not the same, inside or out.
My brown hair is slowly fading black.
My peach skin is turning pale.
My pink lips, are turning black.
All because of how I act inside.
I use to be normal, then it slowly hit me like a timmid drug.
All the pain just came clear.
I knew I needed help, so I got it...
The pills made me sick, and worse then before...
Talking didn't help....
And neither did admitting...
So I've been depressed, severly for sometime....
Now I cut, and take pills to cover up the pain.....
Because in the deepest of my mind, I have no self-blame...

Copyright © addicted2selfharm ... [ 2004-11-26 00:10:59]
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Re: Severe Depression (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenn2004 on Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 12:26:20 AM AEST
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Im so sorry that you are depressed. Admitting it is a good start. I wish i would do the same, but i know if i did i wouldnt stay on the medication. I been on so much medication, that none of it does anything for me and it has terrible side effects. I hope everything works out for you, good luck!!!

Re: Severe Depression (User Rating: 1 )
by THORN on Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 05:47:27 AM AEST
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That's good.
Yeah, most poetry is from hearts compressed into a tight box, filled with raging weight of fear. Depression.
Nothing works. You have to heal it yourself. And healing takes years. At least 10.

Cheers,
-XRaye

Re: Severe Depression (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 09:21:56 AM AEST
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i know how you feel on this front also, a very strong write, telling of your struggle with depression, keep battling you will be victorious in the end *hugs* a very well composed write,

pixe xx

Re: Severe Depression (User Rating: 1 )
by Doriens_Picture on Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 09:40:04 AM AEST
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i hate it when you do this

Re: Severe Depression (User Rating: 1 )
by EternalNight4x on Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 12:24:55 PM AEST
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yet another oen of your peoms I can relate to, very well expressed and well written...I know how it feels but I haven't even gotten to the part fo admitting I am even though many people tell me....well very well written keep on posting

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