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A single red rose in vain
Contributed by
AdamChantell
on
Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 10:18:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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it was the last thing,
you saw after i left you.
a red rose in vain
it was on your bed,
to be as a surprise,
after our first date.
meant to bring a smile,
but it brought true pain,
never to do it again.
indeed you dont care,
so we will never meet again,
not to be friends.
Copyright ©
AdamChantell
... [
2004-11-25 22:18:20] (Date/Time posted on
site)
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Re: A single red rose in vain
(User Rating: 1 ) by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 10:46:06 PM AEST (User
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heartwrenching. excellent haiku format. expressed well. |
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Re: A single red rose in vain
(User Rating: 1 ) by eyesxcriedxout1989 on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 12:38:32 AM AEST (User
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...sucked...lol just kidding I really loved it...Excellent
Mason |
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Re: A single red rose in vain
(User Rating: 1 ) by pixie on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 09:24:34 AM AEST (User
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powerful and beautiful,
pixie xx |
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