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never there

Contributed by surge_joebot on Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 10:11:14 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



Where were you that night when I sat in the park and became something I'm not?
Why weren't you there when I lay cold, in the hospital... shivering and crying out i survived and where were you?
When I cried on your grave stone and my tears became blood from a wrist once drained before... where were you?
When I'm up all night screaming out so cold in pain, when I'm chucking myself into walls, taking my face you once loved and turning into a mangeled car wreck, where were you?
Where were you when the church bells rang and I preyed before your forever closing coffin and damnit I cried for you so long and where were you when you should have dried those tears, but you weren't there... where were you when I needed you most...
When I lay at the bottom of the bath filling it with my blood for your memory, the memory of where were you when you said you'd be there.
When I was with you, you where there, and when I dream and cry these sad songs where are you all this time when you werent here...
Just come back...
Why must you leave me here,
Why can't it be this way?




Copyright © surge_joebot ... [ 2004-11-25 22:11:14]
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Re: never there (User Rating: 1 )
by AdamChantell on Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 10:20:33 PM AEST
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great imagery, very sad though. overall good write.. happy thanksgiving btw.


Re: never there (User Rating: 1 )
by CrimsonTears on Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 10:48:52 PM AEST
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this is a very sad write....it is an excellent on tho....great job

Lots of Love
CrimsonTears


Re: never there (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 11:44:26 PM AEST
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very sad and powerful but a very good write

peace and hope
JENNI


Re: never there (User Rating: 1 )
by parkman on Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 02:29:22 AM AEST
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a very sad and powerful write ty for sharing


Re: never there (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 02:46:34 AM AEST
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awesome, i love it, powerful..


Re: never there (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 05:30:37 AM AEST
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such a very sad write, great poem tho.

Hugs,
Jane




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