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Down into Darkness
Contributed by
pyro_maniac
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Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 09:43:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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What goes up must go down
but what if you never go up
you always go down
down so far you can see the gates of hell
and all hope is lost
does that mean you're lost too?
all you see is darkness
not a shed of light nor a ray of hope
you keep going down
untill you finally give up
and let the darkness take you
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pyro_maniac
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2004-11-25 21:43:09] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Down into Darkness
(User Rating: 1 ) by Avarice_Riot on
Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 09:53:48 PM AEST (User
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Short but interesting. Like the questions you brought up here. |
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Re: Down into Darkness
(User Rating: 1 ) by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 11:32:31 PM AEST (User
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i agree with a.r. great write. |
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Re: Down into Darkness
(User Rating: 1 ) by savedbydeath on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 06:31:04 AM AEST (User
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GREAT WRITE!i really liked this,the message is a popular 1 around here,i bet u'd be good at romantic poetry,well if not ur already good at writing dark poetry!good job keep'em comen i look forward to reading more i give u *****!!
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Re: Down into Darkness
(User Rating: 1 ) by pixie on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 09:29:25 AM AEST (User
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very good poem, hopefully you will find your way into the light one day
pixie xx |
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