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Grace
Contributed by
matt73
on
Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 07:26:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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The rain is falling,
grace cries,
I taste her fragility
and swallow her strife
In the presence of her smile,
a warmth and light,
she leads my optimism
to such great hights
A rarity of perfection,
she's glass,
A reflection of wisdom,
she bares no cracks
Inside good intentions,
I find her,
painting truth's surface
with articulates color
With merciful hands
she strums
the strands of my faith,
she's song
I see her in strangers,
she is humble,
when it rains,
she's beautiful
Grace is our potential,
our desire,
we all see her face
when it rains,
we admire.
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matt73
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2004-11-25 19:26:06]
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Re: Grace
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 07:27:46 PM AEST
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| beautiful. |
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Re: Grace
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by Luinil on
Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 07:31:47 PM AEST
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| incredible writing * |
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Re: Grace
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by SpeedXDemon on
Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 09:11:46 PM AEST
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| Towards the end of your poem I was assuming it to be just another sap proclaiming his love for his girlfriend. After I read the last stanza I went back and read the entire poem again, knowing what "Grace" was. Your poem was wonderful and I'm sure those who read it will think so too. I'm going to e-mail it to my friends. Thank you for posting it. |
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Re: Grace
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by xMizeriex on
Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 11:08:13 AM AEST
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Amazing poem.
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