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Array ( [sid] => 73153 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => cut deeper [time] => 2004-11-25 19:19:38 [hometext] => [bodytext] => "cutt deeper"
No fear no pain
Drag across my skin
Watch your self bleed
Sigh in relief
The scares will forever haunt you
Memories burned on you
External tattoo, morbid dreams
Life is wasting away
One slice never too deep
Ease your pain, don’t say your name
Cut ever so slightly
Watch your self die
Emotionless
Hatred in your hart
No one cares…drag…deep…slice…till your dead..
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cut deeper

Contributed by cutdeeperXalone on Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 07:19:38 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

"cutt deeper"
No fear no pain
Drag across my skin
Watch your self bleed
Sigh in relief
The scares will forever haunt you
Memories burned on you
External tattoo, morbid dreams
Life is wasting away
One slice never too deep
Ease your pain, don’t say your name
Cut ever so slightly
Watch your self die
Emotionless
Hatred in your hart
No one cares…drag…deep…slice…till your dead..
GONE

Copyright Â© cutdeeperXalone ... [ 2004-11-25 19:19:38]
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Re: cut deeper (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 07:29:09 PM AEST
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amazing write. written and expressed well.

Re: cut deeper (User Rating: 1 )
by upomik on Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 02:33:02 PM AEST
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hey...i can really relate to this poem. i think you are an excellent writer! keep up the good work and check out some of my stuff. maybe we're on the same page here

Re: cut deeper (User Rating: 1 )
by Pyrofungus on Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 08:36:02 PM AEST
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gone...yes...emotionless unable to even bring out a smile and when you do it fake just to make the people around you feel somewhat better and keep the feelings inside...everything that you've written about is so true...you did a great job...

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