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Array ( [sid] => 73131 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Something they Forgot [time] => 2004-11-25 16:44:39 [hometext] => Friends and family whom forget about ur birthday! [bodytext] => I can't sleep
I feel something's missing
So I keep on guessing
Until I fall asleep
It's my birthday today
It's a lot to say
It's the greatest day of the year
It always seems so far away but now it's finally here
I thought

I come to school
Feeling so cool
I turned 15
In 3 years I'll be 18!

Finally the came
I thought it was a game
They didnt say a thing
So I asked them
Damn do you know what day it is today?
They didn;t know what to say
I said it's my birthday!
They were like oohh
I would've want them to just go

This was the worse birthday
I ever had
It still sucks

November 23th
I Hope next year
I won't have to cry a tear

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Something they Forgot

Contributed by Gigi_15 on Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 04:44:39 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

I can't sleep
I feel something's missing
So I keep on guessing
Until I fall asleep
It's my birthday today
It's a lot to say
It's the greatest day of the year
It always seems so far away but now it's finally here
I thought

I come to school
Feeling so cool
I turned 15
In 3 years I'll be 18!

Finally the came
I thought it was a game
They didnt say a thing
So I asked them
Damn do you know what day it is today?
They didn;t know what to say
I said it's my birthday!
They were like oohh
I would've want them to just go

This was the worse birthday
I ever had
It still sucks

November 23th
I Hope next year
I won't have to cry a tear

Copyright © Gigi_15 ... [ 2004-11-25 16:44:39]
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Re: Something they Forgot (User Rating: 1 )
by Living_In_My_Dream on Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 05:05:26 PM AEST
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well Ive never felt the pressures of someone forgetting my birthady I usually point it out to the the whole week before it..."you better get me something" lol I always try to put in my side of the sffort I really would hate if they forgot about it...well sorry that that had to happen to you I hope you feel better soon...

much love,
Dani

Re: Something they Forgot (User Rating: 1 )
by Niccy on Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 05:10:40 PM AEST
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I'm so so sorry they forgot your birthday. I would've cried too. Good poem though.

Re: Something they Forgot (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 05:38:59 PM AEST
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happy belated birthday. good write by the way =]

Re: Something they Forgot (User Rating: 1 )
by nascarfive on Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 06:07:16 PM AEST
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look at it this way; when you're my age..you'll be happy no one remembers.. but I know how you feel.. sorry . great reminder though.

Re: Something they Forgot (User Rating: 1 )
by LevyMetal on Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 11:08:06 AM AEST
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This poem was good. Filled with strong emotion and honesty. Sometimes the best poetry comes from the worst situations. Hope your birthday wasn't as bad as you made it seem. My birthday is on Nov. 22! We should celebrate together next year!

Re: Something they Forgot (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Wednesday, 27th July 2005 @ 09:29:52 PM AEST
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That's gotta suck. I'm not into birthdays really, I hate big parties and things about me. If they forgot mine, I'd be sad too, but I... I don't know what I was going to say. Sorry about the wierd comment, and I am sorry about your birthday. May this one be better.
Take care.
David

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