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Array ( [sid] => 73056 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => my life the contradiction [time] => 2004-11-24 22:06:11 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I'm so up myself and way better than you'll ever be.
I cry at night because everything in my life sucks.
I live inside a dark place called my mind.
Where there are no windows...
Only doors opening up a whole world of dispare.
Coridoors that go nowhere.
Feelings that create thunderstorms...
My mind the overcast palace of doom.
Split down the middle, locked away are the good memories.
In a place where no one can harm them,
A place that the evil in me wont go.
Good memories locked away from myself to preserve them.
Never used, never abused... locked away forever. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 185 [topic] => 13 [informant] => surge_joebot [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

my life the contradiction

Contributed by surge_joebot on Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 10:06:11 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I'm so up myself and way better than you'll ever be.
I cry at night because everything in my life sucks.
I live inside a dark place called my mind.
Where there are no windows...
Only doors opening up a whole world of dispare.
Coridoors that go nowhere.
Feelings that create thunderstorms...
My mind the overcast palace of doom.
Split down the middle, locked away are the good memories.
In a place where no one can harm them,
A place that the evil in me wont go.
Good memories locked away from myself to preserve them.
Never used, never abused... locked away forever.

Copyright © surge_joebot ... [ 2004-11-24 22:06:11]
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Re: my life the contradiction (User Rating: 1 )
by girish on Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 11:11:05 PM AEST
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Dear Member,

My life was even this kind at an very early age of 12. falling from the 5th floor of my school bldg I had lost almost everything I possessed. BUt I had taken to the reading of scriptures be it from bible / ramayana / mahabaratha etc. Read my poems they will give you the required stamina.
girish

Re: my life the contradiction (User Rating: 1 )
by EternalNight4x on Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 02:06:22 PM AEST
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very well weitten and well expressed...I feel the same way...well keep posting

Re: my life the contradiction (User Rating: 1 )
by fielding88 on Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 01:32:03 PM AEST
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This is such a sad poem. Not being able to trust yourself with happiness, that was powerful. Beautiful stuff, i like ur work keep it up!

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