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Mild warm
Contributed by
Lisanne
on
Saturday, 23rd November 2002 @ 06:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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It is very cold outside,
The snow is getting black
People walk along the street
But it seems they are not there
They cook coffee in the house
beaming faces, shining eyes
happy laughing all the time
pretty lives in cold town
Copyright ©
Lisanne
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2002-11-23 06:20:00]
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Re: Mild warm
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by OreO on
Saturday, 23rd November 2002 @ 12:27:50 PM AEST
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I think it's beautiful the way you
wrote about snow, don't get much
snow here where i live so it's a
nice vision you gave here.
Thanks for sharing this one
i enjoyed it alot
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::. |
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