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[title] => Hey, anybody got a title for this thing?
[time] => 2004-11-24 17:51:50
[hometext] => The first line began a poem I wrote over ten years ago. Thought I'd try it anew. Interesting though, it still fits. (Comments are always appreciated).
[bodytext] => I am a lake of my unease, dark and deep. I am the shadow of the tree. Behind me, is a life barely lived, a winding path overgrown. Before me, the world is breeding possibility. I am what I am, for now, for me, lost and sweet. I am untangling from this web (of defeat). Above me, the sky has no end, infinite universe unknown. Underneath me, cool water rages on. I am just reaching the surface, still blue and meek. grasping at all I do not see. Within me, the battery was running low, an innocent on her own. Without me, well I am nothing without me. I am left, unforgettably, somber yet free. I am right where I need to be. [comments] => 8 [counter] => 260 [topic] => 61 [informant] => girltranscended [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 25 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )
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