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Array ( [sid] => 73015 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Alone [time] => 2004-11-24 17:22:49 [hometext] => I love to write poems i have a whole bunch i write down in a notebook at skool and then i'll bring them bak here and post as many as possible for comments and ways ppl think my poems could imporve so leave a comment [bodytext] => I am alone....
I always have been. Scared, and afreaid by myself.
wanting to be held, but no one is there.

I am lost in eternity.
A darkness that's everlasting.
Nothing is visible.
I want to see you, but this vast haven is closing in.

I am afraid.
Losing all hope.
I keep trying to hold on to something.
I want so bad to be found.

I am falling
into the shadow as it grasp's me.
I feel like i'm losing everything.
It's gone, everyones gone nothings left.

I want
to let go,
this time i'm giving in
the truth is.........
..........................
I'm Alone

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Alone

Contributed by naughtygurl on Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 05:22:49 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

I am alone....
I always have been. Scared, and afreaid by myself.
wanting to be held, but no one is there.

I am lost in eternity.
A darkness that's everlasting.
Nothing is visible.
I want to see you, but this vast haven is closing in.

I am afraid.
Losing all hope.
I keep trying to hold on to something.
I want so bad to be found.

I am falling
into the shadow as it grasp's me.
I feel like i'm losing everything.
It's gone, everyones gone nothings left.

I want
to let go,
this time i'm giving in
the truth is.........
..........................
I'm Alone

Copyright © naughtygurl ... [ 2004-11-24 17:22:49]
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Re: Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 05:26:24 PM AEST
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you have great potential.... this was filled with raw emotion.

Very well done :o)
Larry

Re: Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Doriens_Picture on Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 05:47:18 PM AEST
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this is a great write it reminds me of my poem

Remembering The Blade

if you want you can read

if you do you might relate

Re: Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 06:08:05 PM AEST
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excellent write. you write better than i did when i was first starting to write poems/songs. i thought some of these stanzas were fantastic for being written so well. keep it up, keep improving, and keep writing what YOU think and feel.

if youre alone you can invent an imaginary friend =]...maybe i should take that advice sometime eh? ::remembers all the poems ive written about loneliness::

Re: Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 06:17:18 PM AEST
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this was pretty darn good. The emotions
were raw and painful. I liked it so I don't know
how you could make it "better". Keep on
posting.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by cooley1818 on Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 12:06:03 PM AEST
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good write, the feelings of being alone truely sux, trust me i know what its like, ive felt that way sense my ex girl broke up with me nearly a year ago, alot of emotion in this poem, i really enjoyed it

cooley1818

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