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Life
Contributed by
naughtygurl
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Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 02:42:59 PM in AEST
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EmotionalPoetry
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I wonder sometimes. I think we can change how we feel. I know that this life is real, There will be no more knives. My friends are my light that guides my soul, and my love is what mends my heart. Some people judge. who could judge me, but if only i let them. So every one i'm back to write again and things are upside down, I have turned it all around my life is mine, with no small price to pay
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Re: Life
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 03:01:35 PM AEST (User
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U go gurl.
I luv these kindda writes. It's always good to see someone grow.
Keep up the awesome writing!
luv, huggs, prayers, strength, smiles,
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Re: Life
(User Rating: 1 ) by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 06:27:17 PM AEST (User
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great write. i wish this was formatted into verses though =/ but thats a small matter. i always wondered how people can judge others, and then it hit me, they never look at themselves. or if they do look at themselves they put the other down to feel better about their own faults. kill an ego to gain an ego is the case i suppose... keep up the great writes. |
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