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Glimmer of Hope.
Contributed by
little_genna
on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 02:18:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Across the line...the shadows fall...
As I walk in the darkness I feel so small
The night engulfs all but a small candlelight
I strive to carry on; alas it takes all my might
Each step I take, hoping to come closer
To the next life chapter.
The Little flame flickers in the distance...
Yet, for now the air is filled with a dense silence.
One little light surrounded by despair
Something about this light will never compare
Unfazed by the cold winds, it burns...
Even as the violent dark tries to return
The flame ignites the fire within...
As a new part of life is about to begin
With a heart full of this eternal light...
The darkness becomes illuminated with moonlight
....that guides the souls in its sight...
SJ & Mangs
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little_genna
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2004-11-24 14:18:54] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Glimmer of Hope.
(User Rating: 1 ) by Pyrofungus on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 02:32:31 PM AEST (User
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the both of you guys did a great job! goes to show there is hope....
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Re: Glimmer of Hope.
(User Rating: 1 ) by bonita2689 on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 04:20:29 PM AEST (User
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Brilliant! Very good premise... |
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Re: Glimmer of Hope.
(User Rating: 1 ) by Catalina on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 04:32:40 PM AEST (User
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Extremely well written. You are very talented.
~Catalina~ |
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Re: Glimmer of Hope.
(User Rating: 1 ) by SkaterGirl16 on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 04:38:17 PM AEST (User
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Very nice job! |
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Re: Glimmer of Hope.
(User Rating: 1 ) by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 06:29:58 PM AEST (User
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you and mangs work well together. ive tried doing something like this with someone once. its interesting how the poem comes out with two people working on it. |
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