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A Heart With No Beat
Contributed by
pixie
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Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 01:31:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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To have a heart with no beat,
Is like trying to walk with no feet,
My heart longs to feel something,
Wants to find its voice so it can sing.
A long time ago heart was at peace,
Now it’s been brought down on its knees,
All it feels is hurt & pain,
It has long shattered under the strain.
The only sound heard is loneliness,
Heart no longer has someone to caress,
It has no-one to love or show affection,
Only misfortune comes in its direction.
It lays heavy & so very beaten,
Dying after all the heartache’s been eaten,
Heart has been drowned with tears,
Seems to be stuck in a reverse gear.
Why has the beat from my heart died?
It feels as if life & love have both lied,
I just want my heartbeat to come back,
Please heartache can you cut me some slack?
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pixie
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Re: A Heart With No Beat
(User Rating: 1 ) by little_genna on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 01:56:21 PM AEST (User
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This is so sad, but such a great poem.
Hun u know where i am if u ever need sum one.
take care of urself
*hugs you tightly*
love
Gen xx |
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Re: A Heart With No Beat
(User Rating: 1 ) by BlindSuicide on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 02:08:44 PM AEST (User
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Great write. I can relate to this in such a way that is unbelieviable. Good job and your not alone.
~Alucia~ |
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Re: A Heart With No Beat
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 04:10:59 PM AEST (User
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Very sad but well said.
Hang tuff, my friend.
Sometimes it jus takes time. You have many friends here so hang in there.
luv, huggs, prayer, faith, hope, joy, peace,
emy |
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Re: A Heart With No Beat
(User Rating: 1 ) by SkaterGirl16 on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 04:46:17 PM AEST (User
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Lovely write... have felt that way myself at times... |
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Re: A Heart With No Beat
(User Rating: 1 ) by Doriens_Picture on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 05:09:19 PM AEST (User
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hey beautiful i do always love your writes no matter how sad i hope this is just a write and that you guys are ok
just remember you will always have a friend in me ok like i confide in you you can do the same |
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Re: A Heart With No Beat
(User Rating: 1 ) by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 06:47:47 PM AEST (User
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excellent write as always. |
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Re: A Heart With No Beat
(User Rating: 1 ) by pander on
Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 06:18:47 AM AEST (User
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I'd just like to echo what SkaterGirl said. This write is so easy to relate to.
Excellennt work once again Pixie!
Luv,
Pander
xxxx
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Re: A Heart With No Beat
(User Rating: 1 ) by AdamChantell on
Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 12:46:39 PM AEST (User
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sad and great at the same time. btw happy thanksgiving
: ) |
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Re: A Heart With No Beat
(User Rating: 1 ) by Catalina on
Sunday, 21st September 2008 @ 02:43:48 PM AEST (User
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been a while since i read one of urs. r u still around? Nicely done! |
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