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An Enchanting Moment in the Life of a Teenage Boy
Contributed by
thepumpkinking
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Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 02:13:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
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"An Enchanting Moment in the Life of a Teenage Boy"
I am talking here with you
While hearing the gentle rain
This is something new,
something new and something strange
I feel like I am flat lined
Every time I hear your voice
Lose my vital signs
But I'm alive inside with joy
I know you can't see these words
But you make black roses turn to red
Know I can't be heard
But you seem to make gold from lead
I have never felt these things
Not so much and not this way
They can't be bought by kings
I value them much more than day
I am talking here with you
While hearing the gentle rain
This is something new,
something new and something strange
This is how dreams are made...
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2004-11-24 02:13:39]
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Re: An Enchanting Moment in the Life of a Teenage Boy
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by blowfish_jane on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 04:44:32 AM AEST
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This is so romantic, very inspiring read.
Hugs,
Jane x |
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Re: An Enchanting Moment in the Life of a Teenage Boy
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by Rxqueen on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 04:57:46 AM AEST
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| I agree, very nice! I enjoyed reading this one! |
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Re: An Enchanting Moment in the Life of a Teenage Boy
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by Faddy on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 08:50:51 AM AEST
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| This poem goes along with all of my love poems! It's a beautiful poem and a smooth read, I enjoyed every word. Your use of words was spectacular and the poem itself is a masterpiece. |
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Re: An Enchanting Moment in the Life of a Teenage Boy
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by Deathly_Rose on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 11:38:36 AM AEST
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Wow...
this was a very well written poem, very romantic, and unique.
It's not quite like the others, but it's definately one of the best that i have read. You really should keep up the good work, this was a true piece of art.
*~Alicia~*
ie. Deathly_Rose
*hope to talk to you* |
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