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our sad moon
Contributed by
cinderella88
on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 01:41:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
MiscPoems
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did you notice the moon was sad tonight?
i wonder what was wrong
maybe it could hear my heart
singing its sad sad song
have you ever wondered
if the stars are the sad moons tears
that stay forever in the sky
to remind us over the years
there were so many stars out tonight
burning brightly in the sky
i think about the sad moons tears
wondering why does it cry
why is our pale moon so sad?
does it feel our pain?
maybe its what softens our tears
and stops us going insane
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cinderella88
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2004-11-24 01:41:44] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: our sad moon
(User Rating: 1 ) by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 01:49:06 AM AEST (User
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this is beautiful, well done |
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Re: our sad moon
(User Rating: 1 ) by freckle on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 05:29:03 PM AEST (User
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Good write. |
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Re: our sad moon
(User Rating: 1 ) by xMizeriex on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 06:20:55 AM AEST (User
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Beautiful.
Bx |
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Re: our sad moon
(User Rating: 1 ) by flamingblade on
Tuesday, 16th May 2006 @ 03:02:54 PM AEST (User
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lovely |
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