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Array ( [sid] => 72912 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Alone [time] => 2004-11-23 22:03:38 [hometext] => Bleh.....I was deeply sad and ill when I wrote this.... [bodytext] => Why are you dying while I'm still here
I need you now in my eighteenth year
Some sort of guidance, knowledge deep
But slowly away that all does creep
So I am left to wander on
And face the world as its biggest con
I feel that I am all alone
Home just doesn't feel like home...
The closest thing I ever had
To having a mother when all was bad
But you'll soon be gone and I'll be left
So screw the world and bring on death. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 194 [topic] => 6 [informant] => gimpie [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )
Alone

Contributed by gimpie on Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 10:03:38 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



Why are you dying while I'm still here
I need you now in my eighteenth year
Some sort of guidance, knowledge deep
But slowly away that all does creep
So I am left to wander on
And face the world as its biggest con
I feel that I am all alone
Home just doesn't feel like home...
The closest thing I ever had
To having a mother when all was bad
But you'll soon be gone and I'll be left
So screw the world and bring on death.




Copyright © gimpie ... [ 2004-11-23 22:03:38]
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Re: Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by MLCstar on Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 02:06:27 PM AEST
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Wow what deep emotion so rawly expressed. I am so close to my mother that I cannot imagine losing her. Is this based on reality? If so, I am truely sorry. They say that great poetry comes through strong emotion. you prove it.


Re: Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Sinned on Sunday, 15th May 2005 @ 12:11:10 PM AEST
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Gimpie
You got to me again.I have to give you another five.Your anger & yes sadness jumps out at me. You express things so very well.
I can understand your terrible feelings of being alone.I speak from my own experience,but you young ladie will take on the world and win.
I hope I run across your poems again,but must comment on others poems.

I care for you dear friend.
Sinned




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