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Array ( [sid] => 72900 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => questions [time] => 2004-11-23 21:11:30 [hometext] => just came to me also didnt know what to put it under PLEASE COMMENT [bodytext] => If i were to die tonight
would you care?
If i said Goodbye
would you sit in dispare?
If i told you to go to hell
would you say thats not fair?
If I tried to take my life
would you try and stop me?
If i told you i hated you
would you say you hated me too?

All these questions on my mind
All these questions
and no answers
I love you to much to live
everyday
I live in pain

You dont know what you do
HELL
i dont even know
but being with you
makes me cry
all the time

this cant be love
Cinderelle
never cried

Snow white
didnt stain her sheets
with blood

But i love you so
If you were to leave
I dont know what
I would do

But its killing me inside

Why cant I tell you?
Why must I hide?
When can I show you
the real me?
When can I speak?
Can you please help me?

So many questions
So little answers
[comments] => 1 [counter] => 170 [topic] => 61 [informant] => vampyrekiss [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )

questions

Contributed by vampyrekiss on Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 09:11:30 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

If i were to die tonight
would you care?
If i said Goodbye
would you sit in dispare?
If i told you to go to hell
would you say thats not fair?
If I tried to take my life
would you try and stop me?
If i told you i hated you
would you say you hated me too?

All these questions on my mind
All these questions
and no answers
I love you to much to live
everyday
I live in pain

You dont know what you do
HELL
i dont even know
but being with you
makes me cry
all the time

this cant be love
Cinderelle
never cried

Snow white
didnt stain her sheets
with blood

But i love you so
If you were to leave
I dont know what
I would do

But its killing me inside

Why cant I tell you?
Why must I hide?
When can I show you
the real me?
When can I speak?
Can you please help me?

So many questions
So little answers

Copyright © vampyrekiss ... [ 2004-11-23 21:11:30]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: questions (User Rating: 1 )
by HellsLibrarian on Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 09:23:34 PM AEST
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Aside from the misspelling of despair, I pretty much liked your poem. Self struggle was a good category to put it under. And to answer one of your questions- never show the "real" you. Some things just aren't meant for another to know. (Plus, if you tell all of your secrets, there's no reason for someone to continue to be interested. *winks*)

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