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Array ( [sid] => 72870 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Drowning [time] => 2004-11-23 16:10:39 [hometext] => This won't be how I wanted it, but please comment anyway [bodytext] => Pull the trigger while I'm happy
Don't wanna kick me when I'm down
Wanna kill me when I'm lost in my emotions
And in sleep I am

Drowning
In the pool of my dreams
And staring in your eyes it seems
Like eternity,
So kill me

The wind that caught your hair
And whipped it around
To reveal eyes that shine
And I'm

Drowning
In the pool of my dreams
And staring in your eyes it seems
Like eternity,
So kill me

Drown me
Kill me
Make me
Lovely
In poetic splendor
But still I'm

Drowning
In the pool of my tears
Ripping up my fears
But staring in your eyes
For eternity
I'm lost [comments] => 3 [counter] => 248 [topic] => 34 [informant] => eyesxcriedxout1989 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )

Drowning

Contributed by eyesxcriedxout1989 on Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 04:10:39 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

Pull the trigger while I'm happy
Don't wanna kick me when I'm down
Wanna kill me when I'm lost in my emotions
And in sleep I am

Drowning
In the pool of my dreams
And staring in your eyes it seems
Like eternity,
So kill me

The wind that caught your hair
And whipped it around
To reveal eyes that shine
And I'm

Drowning
In the pool of my dreams
And staring in your eyes it seems
Like eternity,
So kill me

Drown me
Kill me
Make me
Lovely
In poetic splendor
But still I'm

Drowning
In the pool of my tears
Ripping up my fears
But staring in your eyes
For eternity
I'm lost

Copyright © eyesxcriedxout1989 ... [ 2004-11-23 16:10:39]
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Re: Drowning (User Rating: 1 )
by theMoth on Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 04:37:32 PM AEST
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Really cool lyrics, Mason.

I was very impressed.
And would like to see more.
(Do an album series maybe?)

--Mothy

Re: Drowning (User Rating: 1 )
by deadreckoning1983 on Saturday, 27th November 2004 @ 12:08:04 AM AEST
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well i don't know what you wanted it to be, but damn this was freakin' amazing, if you keep writing like this you'll be better than me, which is more than i can say about myself. great write!!!!!!!!!!

Re: Drowning (User Rating: 1 )
by Katie2008 on Saturday, 27th November 2004 @ 09:43:58 PM AEST
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Amazing
Katie

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