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Array ( [sid] => 72866 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Two Tickets for a Guilt Trip [time] => 2004-11-23 15:59:26 [hometext] => I'm so sick of highschool and all its bull****...anyway, this is about all those fake people out there, who put you on guilt trips...comments would be awesome [bodytext] => I'll put on my mask
The sad look of
Desperation
The depression gleams in my eyes
Pity, sorrow, bulls***
Lies are all we are
Masks on
Faces painted with red dye
And we'll splash some on our wrists
While everyone stares
"Oh poor soul"
Shut up, I'm too much of a wuss
To cut myself
So I'll just put on my mask
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Two Tickets for a Guilt Trip

Contributed by eyesxcriedxout1989 on Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 03:59:26 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

I'll put on my mask
The sad look of
Desperation
The depression gleams in my eyes
Pity, sorrow, bulls***
Lies are all we are
Masks on
Faces painted with red dye
And we'll splash some on our wrists
While everyone stares
"Oh poor soul"
Shut up, I'm too much of a wuss
To cut myself
So I'll just put on my mask
Cry for me

Copyright © eyesxcriedxout1989 ... [ 2004-11-23 15:59:26]
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Re: Two Tickets for a Guilt Trip (User Rating: 1 )
by Nessa_Lee on Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 04:15:22 PM AEST
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I can really relate....and I agree that highschool and the fake ppl there its really all bulls**. But you learn to deal, and eventually its over! Good write!
~*~Nessa Lee~*~

Re: Two Tickets for a Guilt Trip (User Rating: 1 )
by theMoth on Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 08:39:00 PM AEST
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Disillusionment
very clearly expressed.

But in this case you clearly state
that your High School vampires
are just totally putting on an act.

--Mothy

Re: Two Tickets for a Guilt Trip (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 08:00:05 PM AEST
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Hmmm..interesting...
Jenni

Re: Two Tickets for a Guilt Trip (User Rating: 1 )
by deadreckoning1983 on Saturday, 27th November 2004 @ 12:01:22 AM AEST
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mason this was an excellent excellent write. all your stuff is great but this, this was one of your very very best. great write even greater props

Re: Two Tickets for a Guilt Trip (User Rating: 1 )
by shattered_heart on Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 07:22:04 PM AEST
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Your very right. We do all put on masks. We all try to be something we are not, or try to cover up how we really feel. I don't like fake people, but I realize that I am sometimes one of them...Good write, I like it.

- Rachelle

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