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Array ( [sid] => 72837 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => my risks never seem to pay off [time] => 2004-11-23 11:27:11 [hometext] => showed the guy i like my last poem 'im such a chicken' this poem explains the results................... [bodytext] =>

Stupid ideas, rash choices,
It involved too many chances.
I left it for him to read,
This kept me worried.
I hardly got a response, a couple of smiles, no words,
My mood moved even further downwards.
I shouldn’t have been talked into it,
I did feel rather split.
Should have reclaimed it when I still had time,
But instead I chose to give him my rhyme
The lack of response makes me feel worthless,
Now completely full of bleakness.
All I can think is that you wish not to have a discussion,
Tomorrow I will take a bit more precaution….

SJ

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my risks never seem to pay off

Contributed by little_genna on Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 11:27:11 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

Stupid ideas, rash choices,
It involved too many chances.
I left it for him to read,
This kept me worried.
I hardly got a response, a couple of smiles, no words,
My mood moved even further downwards.
I shouldn’t have been talked into it,
I did feel rather split.
Should have reclaimed it when I still had time,
But instead I chose to give him my rhyme
The lack of response makes me feel worthless,
Now completely full of bleakness.
All I can think is that you wish not to have a discussion,
Tomorrow I will take a bit more precaution….

SJ

Copyright © little_genna ... [ 2004-11-23 11:27:11]
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Re: my risks never seem to pay off (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 11:29:08 AM AEST
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i hope that one day your risks do pay off ro you, sometimes in life we have to take risks to get what we want *hugs*

god write,
pixie xx

Re: my risks never seem to pay off (User Rating: 1 )
by Mangs on Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 12:02:15 PM AEST
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ever wonder if he might be trying to figure out what to say??

Re: my risks never seem to pay off (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 12:03:04 PM AEST
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I can relate to this feeling completely.
You know what...a guy who won't take the time to say something in response isn't worth your time. There's better out there.
Stitch

Re: my risks never seem to pay off (User Rating: 1 )
by Dusty on Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 02:01:05 PM AEST
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Don't always take mens' reaction at face value. I have learned from experience, especially when giving them some written material. I have surprised a man or two silent in my day. I hope everything works out for, and at least now the worst part-the wondering- is over, it's his move, no?
~dusty~

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