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I couldn't speak
no, not to anyone
When you broke my heart you stole my thoughts
all I could think of is your face
When you broke my heart please believe you stole my life
for you were my all
Why is it that you cannot see what you've done?
Do you even regret?
Doubt? I doubt it.
But I would like you to know that when you broke my heart you left me numb
and lost
the pain piercing
stabbing
You alone contain the pieces of my heart
and only you can let them go
so give them back
no use are they to you
never were they when you broke my heart. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 165 [topic] => 13 [informant] => GothicGrrl666 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

When You Broke My Heart

Contributed by GothicGrrl666 on Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 11:05:49 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

When you broke my heart you stole my breath
I couldn't speak
no, not to anyone
When you broke my heart you stole my thoughts
all I could think of is your face
When you broke my heart please believe you stole my life
for you were my all
Why is it that you cannot see what you've done?
Do you even regret?
Doubt? I doubt it.
But I would like you to know that when you broke my heart you left me numb
and lost
the pain piercing
stabbing
You alone contain the pieces of my heart
and only you can let them go
so give them back
no use are they to you
never were they when you broke my heart.

Copyright © GothicGrrl666 ... [ 2004-11-23 11:05:49]
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Re: When You Broke My Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 11:06:34 AM AEST
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welcome to ypdc, very good dark write,

pixie xx

Re: When You Broke My Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 11:24:01 AM AEST
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Mmmmm, been there. It stinks. I can related completely.
Stitch

Re: When You Broke My Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by Pyrofungus on Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 11:28:15 AM AEST
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very good...and sad...

please comment on my work too
summer

Re: When You Broke My Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by Nessa_Lee on Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 04:09:08 PM AEST
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I know it totally sucks to be heartbroken. But if it weren't for my first hearbreak I would have never thought of writing. This was a very good write...I hope to see more from you!
~*~Nessa Lee~*~

Re: When You Broke My Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampyre_BloodWraith on Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 08:52:04 AM AEST
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Beautiful write, capturing the feelings of ice and the pain of love broken.
awesome poem.

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