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Array ( [sid] => 72829 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I'm Sorry [time] => 2004-11-23 10:50:03 [hometext] => This poem is basiclly a sorry letter to my boyfriend. He means the world to me and I want him to know that! [bodytext] => I always seem to make you mad
By the things I do or don’t do
I try to say sorry and I really mean it
But you still don’t get the clue.
I don’t know how I can do this
I’m getting torn up inside
I always feel like it’s my fault
I’m getting sick of trying to hide.
I hide how I feel inside
Because I don’t want you to get mad
I feel like I’m slowly losing
Everything I had.
You were my everything
Everything and more
But you took my heart for granted
And now you’re walking out the door.
You dropped me off at school today
Mad at me again
With that same grin you have on your face
Every time you win.
Sometimes I cry myself to sleep at night
Because of a fight we’ve just had
Knowing it was my fault
I was the one that made you mad.
I’m in pain inside
Yet a smile is what I show
I act happy when I’m around people
But breakdown when I’m alone.
Maybe I just don’t understand
How you feel inside
But how am I supposed to know
If all you do is hide.
I hope you know I’m sorry
And that I love you with all my heart
But I don’t know how much longer I can do this
But I wont leave I’ll stay by your side
like I promised in from the start.
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I'm Sorry

Contributed by BrokenApartHeart on Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 10:50:03 AM in AEST
Topic: ApologyPoetry



I always seem to make you mad
By the things I do or don’t do
I try to say sorry and I really mean it
But you still don’t get the clue.
I don’t know how I can do this
I’m getting torn up inside
I always feel like it’s my fault
I’m getting sick of trying to hide.
I hide how I feel inside
Because I don’t want you to get mad
I feel like I’m slowly losing
Everything I had.
You were my everything
Everything and more
But you took my heart for granted
And now you’re walking out the door.
You dropped me off at school today
Mad at me again
With that same grin you have on your face
Every time you win.
Sometimes I cry myself to sleep at night
Because of a fight we’ve just had
Knowing it was my fault
I was the one that made you mad.
I’m in pain inside
Yet a smile is what I show
I act happy when I’m around people
But breakdown when I’m alone.
Maybe I just don’t understand
How you feel inside
But how am I supposed to know
If all you do is hide.
I hope you know I’m sorry
And that I love you with all my heart
But I don’t know how much longer I can do this
But I wont leave I’ll stay by your side
like I promised in from the start.




Copyright © BrokenApartHeart ... [ 2004-11-23 10:50:03]
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Re: I'm Sorry (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 10:51:33 AM AEST
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awww that is really sweet, you gotta show him this and watch his heart melt *hugs*

pixie xx


Re: I'm Sorry (User Rating: 1 )
by iodinelove on Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 10:57:51 AM AEST
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ah, promises...
i've made a few of those in my travels
never could keep them, i tried
well ya know, i guess i never did...
sometimes love is not enough.....
or so i've been told....
i like this, it made me remember (although reflection can sometimes cause more harm than good.) I'm sure your boy will love it ^_^




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