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Array ( [sid] => 7282 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => COLD I AM [time] => 2002-11-22 20:00:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Sometimes I feel,
Inside,
So torn apart.

There's no place to hide,
When you have no heart.

Shows on the outside,
When love is torn to shreds,
From the start.

Cold I am.
Cold as stone.
Cold I am.
Cold to the bone.

Winter is the season,
In my heart.
An' it won't thaw out.

Tryin' to reach through,
Touch you,
But there's a wall of ice.
An' I can't break through.

My heart's cold as stone.
From being all alone.

Dien' from tryin',
To find love in time.

Emotions all tied up in knots.
Goin' down in flames,
From takin' too many shots.

Lack of feelings,
Don't feel the same.
Feeling nothin',
In my brain.

Don't feel lovin'.
Don't feel pain.

So hard to live life,
Feelin' like you've already died.

Through all the struggle an' strife,
Wonderin' why?
Why haven't I cried?

Feelin' the cold sharp knife,
Stabbin' from the inside.

Cold I am.
Cold as stone.
Cold I am.
Cold to the bone.

Winter is the season,
In my heart.
An' it won't thaw out.

Tryin' to reach through,
Touch you,
But there's a wall of ice,
An' I can't break through.

Always refusing,
Love that was there.

Was I being selfish,
Wanting more than my share?

Always pondering,
Why no one seemed to care.

Always wondering,
Why no one wanted to play fair.

Always hiding,
Safe behind the walls I built there.

Always questioning,
What I felt in the air.

Love.
A simple and refined,
Torture of the mind.
Masochistic by nature.

Love.

Blind.

Hard to find.

But it can also be,
Your savior.

Cold I am.
Cold as stone.
Cold I am.
Cold to the bone.

Winter is the season,
In my heart.
An' it won't thaw out.

Tryin' to reach through,
Touch you,
But there's a wall of ice.
An' I can't break through.

Copyright © 1993 by Alexander McDonald
All rights reserved.
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COLD I AM

Contributed by Alexander_McDonald on Friday, 22nd November 2002 @ 08:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Sometimes I feel,
Inside,
So torn apart.

There's no place to hide,
When you have no heart.

Shows on the outside,
When love is torn to shreds,
From the start.

Cold I am.
Cold as stone.
Cold I am.
Cold to the bone.

Winter is the season,
In my heart.
An' it won't thaw out.

Tryin' to reach through,
Touch you,
But there's a wall of ice.
An' I can't break through.

My heart's cold as stone.
From being all alone.

Dien' from tryin',
To find love in time.

Emotions all tied up in knots.
Goin' down in flames,
From takin' too many shots.

Lack of feelings,
Don't feel the same.
Feeling nothin',
In my brain.

Don't feel lovin'.
Don't feel pain.

So hard to live life,
Feelin' like you've already died.

Through all the struggle an' strife,
Wonderin' why?
Why haven't I cried?

Feelin' the cold sharp knife,
Stabbin' from the inside.

Cold I am.
Cold as stone.
Cold I am.
Cold to the bone.

Winter is the season,
In my heart.
An' it won't thaw out.

Tryin' to reach through,
Touch you,
But there's a wall of ice,
An' I can't break through.

Always refusing,
Love that was there.

Was I being selfish,
Wanting more than my share?

Always pondering,
Why no one seemed to care.

Always wondering,
Why no one wanted to play fair.

Always hiding,
Safe behind the walls I built there.

Always questioning,
What I felt in the air.

Love.
A simple and refined,
Torture of the mind.
Masochistic by nature.

Love.

Blind.

Hard to find.

But it can also be,
Your savior.

Cold I am.
Cold as stone.
Cold I am.
Cold to the bone.

Winter is the season,
In my heart.
An' it won't thaw out.

Tryin' to reach through,
Touch you,
But there's a wall of ice.
An' I can't break through.

Copyright © 1993 by Alexander McDonald
All rights reserved.
www.avatar-ink.com

Copyright Â© Alexander_McDonald ... [ 2002-11-22 20:00:00]
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Re: COLD I AM (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Friday, 22nd November 2002 @ 11:01:38 PM AEST
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You got to stop writing about me
like this lol...just kidding, This one
touched my heart deeply because
i know how this feels and it's so
painful, such a dark painful place
to be, one which i am in at this
very moment, so it hit home with
me pretty hard, Thanks for sharing
this one, Keep em' coming i enjoy
reading your poetry
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.

Re: COLD I AM (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Friday, 22nd November 2002 @ 11:23:58 PM AEST
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This was very well written,nicely done! Christina

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