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Array ( [sid] => 72817 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My Life [time] => 2004-11-23 09:03:49 [hometext] => this is how i am an how i used to be [bodytext] => It used to feel pointless
it used to feel like i was unwanted
used to feel like i was unneeded
it used to feel like there was no point
then i went through a change
i was all depressed
i was unhappy
i was sad
i was heartbroken
i was unloved
then i found her
she looked at me like i was a person
made me feel like i was worth summin
made me think i had a reason to be here
a reason to move on
a reason to live
now i feel so happy
so wanted
so loved
so inspired
i feel like i need to be here
i need to be here with sumone
that im not alone
that im meant for a life
my life used to be hateful
used to be cruel
used to be full of pain
now its happy
noe its ful of joy
noy i need to show it
i need to show my feelings
need to be myself
need to change for the better
need to act normal
i need to be a regular person
my life is better now
my life now is all that matters
my life back then is the past
the past i dont want to forget
but i need to
my life is all good
all better since i moved on [comments] => 1 [counter] => 172 [topic] => 21 [informant] => Etrojan08 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )
My Life

Contributed by Etrojan08 on Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 09:03:49 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



It used to feel pointless
it used to feel like i was unwanted
used to feel like i was unneeded
it used to feel like there was no point
then i went through a change
i was all depressed
i was unhappy
i was sad
i was heartbroken
i was unloved
then i found her
she looked at me like i was a person
made me feel like i was worth summin
made me think i had a reason to be here
a reason to move on
a reason to live
now i feel so happy
so wanted
so loved
so inspired
i feel like i need to be here
i need to be here with sumone
that im not alone
that im meant for a life
my life used to be hateful
used to be cruel
used to be full of pain
now its happy
noe its ful of joy
noy i need to show it
i need to show my feelings
need to be myself
need to change for the better
need to act normal
i need to be a regular person
my life is better now
my life now is all that matters
my life back then is the past
the past i dont want to forget
but i need to
my life is all good
all better since i moved on




Copyright © Etrojan08 ... [ 2004-11-23 09:03:49]
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Re: My Life (User Rating: 1 )
by n2dep2care on Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 09:09:42 AM AEST
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Emotion packed and heart warming. Very fine write! I feel this, I like this very much!

Laurie




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