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Array ( [sid] => 72811 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Bored [time] => 2004-11-23 08:00:17 [hometext] => Break out of your routine... lets get wild! Comments always appreciated, good and bad! [bodytext] => break free of the monotony and ride or die tonight
say no to the usual and put up one hell of a fight
be someone else for one day or even just an hour
show me you have the courage, strength, and the power
take the untaken way with out the slightest hesitation
do something spontanious and release your frustrations
but whatever you do take me with you please
you are my cure, boredom my disease
lets stay out all night and forget about the time
lets drink tequila stright from the bottle, throw away the lime
go to places we have never thought to even go
think up things we never thought we'd ever even know
get away from our same old, same old routine
trust me, once there, you'll understand what I meen
we will see each other in a new exciting light
so please baby, lets be completely wild tonight

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Bored

Contributed by Rxqueen on Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 08:00:17 AM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

break free of the monotony and ride or die tonight
say no to the usual and put up one hell of a fight
be someone else for one day or even just an hour
show me you have the courage, strength, and the power
take the untaken way with out the slightest hesitation
do something spontanious and release your frustrations
but whatever you do take me with you please
you are my cure, boredom my disease
lets stay out all night and forget about the time
lets drink tequila stright from the bottle, throw away the lime
go to places we have never thought to even go
think up things we never thought we'd ever even know
get away from our same old, same old routine
trust me, once there, you'll understand what I meen
we will see each other in a new exciting light
so please baby, lets be completely wild tonight

Copyright © Rxqueen ... [ 2004-11-23 08:00:17]
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Re: Bored (User Rating: 1 )
by UnlovedChild on Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 08:21:35 PM AEST
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Sweet one. This is a really cute imaginative poem. It's stuff that people should do to let go and not be themselves for one night. I really love this poem. It's like your others so unexpected like a box of chocolates, you never know what you are going to get. But you also won't know if you never try something new. Hehe maybe I should do something new. Well I hope you have as much fun as this poem describes because I wouldn't want anyone or anything to ever take that smile off your face!!! Love ya lots *hugs* great work never stop doing what you do best, and no I don't mean being wild!

Re: Bored (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 10:26:58 PM AEST
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How could anyone make a bad comment about this! This is absolutly awsome! It would be a number 1 song if the write person wrote the music to go with it!

Re: Bored (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 02:38:59 PM AEST
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I do like this!!!!
Wonderful write and great sentiment!

Re: Bored (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 08:21:22 PM AEST
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This is awesome!! I love the idea of going wild for one night...and I have with my sisters on a few occasions..and boy!! did I enjoy myself.....
Good write..
Jenni

Re: Bored (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 06:30:13 AM AEST
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Feeling manic? This is exactly how I get in my manic phase. Scares my hubby to death. I enjoy your rhyme scheme and use of words, but watch your spelling and punctuation a little more and please use some caps---all small letters are harder on older eyes.
Stitch

Re: Bored (User Rating: 1 )
by Sinned on Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 08:42:56 AM AEST
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Most are too reserved
Don't have the nerve
Take a chance
Naked we dance
Loving under the stars
Butts as red as mars
What can I say
Your poetry makes my day

Sinned

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