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Array ( [sid] => 72789 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Sandy Renolds [time] => 2004-11-23 02:02:17 [hometext] => Now this is supposed to represent ultimate fear, I found it extremely hard to understand, but you have to imagine it, and you should get it, lol, have a go and comments are welcome [bodytext] => Sandy lived in a small wooden house
He lived in a world, where he was the only being in existence
No one else, no animals
Just tree's, and Sandy

Night fell
Wind blew
And silence soon set in

"........."

Sandy never slept
His mind had taken him away
He sat and rocked back and forth in his chair
And stared into the dark

Sandy's eyes were always open
He never closed them
He waited still and then
The door creaked open
To reveal nothing

Because thats all that there ever was

".........."

Ultimate fear

Sandy walked slowly into the forest
Nothing could he hear
Silence

He wandered deep in
Never shutting his eyes
Imagine them
Deep
Dying and physcho
But he was just a man
Living as he did

Soon he came to a stop
And stared into dark
Into nothing

Because that is all that ever was

Nothing

So therefore Nowhere could he be

Now Sandy sits and waits to die
After his mind betrayed him and sent him mad
He writes strange things
He murmurs strange words

Nowhere is he
And forever will be [comments] => 3 [counter] => 208 [topic] => 68 [informant] => cj_ranson [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => fictional )
Sandy Renolds

Contributed by cj_ranson on Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 02:02:17 AM in AEST
Topic: fictional



Sandy lived in a small wooden house
He lived in a world, where he was the only being in existence
No one else, no animals
Just tree's, and Sandy

Night fell
Wind blew
And silence soon set in

"........."

Sandy never slept
His mind had taken him away
He sat and rocked back and forth in his chair
And stared into the dark

Sandy's eyes were always open
He never closed them
He waited still and then
The door creaked open
To reveal nothing

Because thats all that there ever was

".........."

Ultimate fear

Sandy walked slowly into the forest
Nothing could he hear
Silence

He wandered deep in
Never shutting his eyes
Imagine them
Deep
Dying and physcho
But he was just a man
Living as he did

Soon he came to a stop
And stared into dark
Into nothing

Because that is all that ever was

Nothing

So therefore Nowhere could he be

Now Sandy sits and waits to die
After his mind betrayed him and sent him mad
He writes strange things
He murmurs strange words

Nowhere is he
And forever will be




Copyright © cj_ranson ... [ 2004-11-23 02:02:17]
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Re: Sandy Renolds (User Rating: 1 )
by Row on Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 03:02:47 AM AEST
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nice ideas and.. like stuff sean-o


Re: Sandy Renolds (User Rating: 1 )
by Dizza_13 on Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 02:20:15 AM AEST
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nice write. good ideas here sean. well done another
great write

dizza


Re: Sandy Renolds (User Rating: 1 )
by Stej on Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 04:34:28 AM AEST
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this poem is just so cute- good to hear that there's some lighter topics people write about these days....nice work there




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