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Array ( [sid] => 72772 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => change [time] => 2004-11-22 22:35:16 [hometext] => something i started 2 write was gonna b funny at 1st but got serious at the end, let me know what u think(its nothing much random thoughts) kinda in complete [bodytext] => your 30 yrs old
u have nose hairs on ur toes
life has brought u many woes
experienced different hoes
girls, homies and bros.
whats it like to be 40
if i make it to 80,
lordy, lordy
alot lot of people cuss the old
but lines on their face
are storys unknown
many trails and
victorys indwell
the loves speak of heavn
the hurts speak of hell
many voices they've heard
the people they met
the most intelligent
the most obserb
30 yrs old hummm
i have storys untold
days of a teenager
i was was so bold
now wisdom is in my hand
and with time i understand
but ignorance is bliss
sometimes i wish
i didnt know
but i do
what can u do
( not a poem after this just something i need 2 say )
enjoy iife
learn from everyone u meet
something good
or something bad
recieve the good
learn from the bad
not every one old is wise
you could be 50 and
in an ally drinking wine
or 25 in a mansion
save ur $$
be kind 2 all u meet
give with a big heart
u never know when u will need someones kindness one day
learn all you can
remember no matter what age u are
its never 2 late 2 change
their was this friend of mine
he said i dont believe history
repeats its self
i said it doesnt, then i repeated what albert einstein
said,"without CHANGE history repeats its self"
my mom and dad were talking about getting back 2gather after
years of divorce, and my dad said things wont be the same
and i told him things dont need 2 be the same
2 change we have 2 change
cant do the same things and expect different results
n-e-way i was supposed 2 say all this maybe its 4 u or maybe it was just 4 me
change can be good, make the most of it
love people
humble yourself
it all comes back 2 you
the good and the bad
even the hidden things [comments] => 2 [counter] => 158 [topic] => 43 [informant] => timmy2scoops [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
change

Contributed by timmy2scoops on Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 10:35:16 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



your 30 yrs old
u have nose hairs on ur toes
life has brought u many woes
experienced different hoes
girls, homies and bros.
whats it like to be 40
if i make it to 80,
lordy, lordy
alot lot of people cuss the old
but lines on their face
are storys unknown
many trails and
victorys indwell
the loves speak of heavn
the hurts speak of hell
many voices they've heard
the people they met
the most intelligent
the most obserb
30 yrs old hummm
i have storys untold
days of a teenager
i was was so bold
now wisdom is in my hand
and with time i understand
but ignorance is bliss
sometimes i wish
i didnt know
but i do
what can u do
( not a poem after this just something i need 2 say )
enjoy iife
learn from everyone u meet
something good
or something bad
recieve the good
learn from the bad
not every one old is wise
you could be 50 and
in an ally drinking wine
or 25 in a mansion
save ur $$
be kind 2 all u meet
give with a big heart
u never know when u will need someones kindness one day
learn all you can
remember no matter what age u are
its never 2 late 2 change
their was this friend of mine
he said i dont believe history
repeats its self
i said it doesnt, then i repeated what albert einstein
said,"without CHANGE history repeats its self"
my mom and dad were talking about getting back 2gather after
years of divorce, and my dad said things wont be the same
and i told him things dont need 2 be the same
2 change we have 2 change
cant do the same things and expect different results
n-e-way i was supposed 2 say all this maybe its 4 u or maybe it was just 4 me
change can be good, make the most of it
love people
humble yourself
it all comes back 2 you
the good and the bad
even the hidden things




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Re: change (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 03:47:00 AM AEST
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A very thought provoking poem, like you said its a little funny at first then it got serious in the ending and that's a nice mix if you know what your doing. I like this one very different from what I normally read.

Hugs,
Jane


Re: change (User Rating: 1 )
by Rxqueen on Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 05:18:21 AM AEST
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Good message. Another good write.




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