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I looked into your eyes
they tore into me
with that look in your eyes
that only says a million things
you look away
I'm not ready for anything
The last time
I touched your hand
in the dark
in the woods
feeling it
the electricity
The last time
I see your smile
next too me
looking in my eyes
can't look away
never look away
The last time
I hear your voice
in my head
always in my head
The last time
you say goodbye
I'm not ready
I'll never be ready
The last time
I felt your eyes on me
always tearing into me
The last time
the last day
the final day
The last time
I'll ever see you
I miss you
goodbye [comments] => 2 [counter] => 181 [topic] => 32 [informant] => MnMnMsrcool [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

The last time

Contributed by MnMnMsrcool on Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 09:35:22 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

The last time
I looked into your eyes
they tore into me
with that look in your eyes
that only says a million things
you look away
I'm not ready for anything
The last time
I touched your hand
in the dark
in the woods
feeling it
the electricity
The last time
I see your smile
next too me
looking in my eyes
can't look away
never look away
The last time
I hear your voice
in my head
always in my head
The last time
you say goodbye
I'm not ready
I'll never be ready
The last time
I felt your eyes on me
always tearing into me
The last time
the last day
the final day
The last time
I'll ever see you
I miss you
goodbye

Copyright © MnMnMsrcool ... [ 2004-11-22 21:35:22]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: The last time (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 10:00:46 PM AEST
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this is so sad, but beautiful. good job!

Re: The last time (User Rating: 1 )
by LEMMEN on Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 11:12:00 PM AEST
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Very sad but ver well written good job.

~DENNIS~

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