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I'm drowning out your voice,
I can't bare your peircing words.
Full of hate, full of pain,
the anger in you stirs.

I ignore how you grab me,
and put me up against the wall.
I try not to let tears flow,
when you hit me and I fall.

I look away from your face,
since the expression is still there.
Your dark eyes are still apon me,
in dissapointment you stare.

Your abuse gives you pleasure,
and keeps me in lost hopes.
One day you'll have an end with me,
and I'll be the one to tie the rope...

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Just Another Hit

Contributed by shattered_heart on Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 07:11:22 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

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I'm drowning out your voice,
I can't bare your peircing words.
Full of hate, full of pain,
the anger in you stirs.

I ignore how you grab me,
and put me up against the wall.
I try not to let tears flow,
when you hit me and I fall.

I look away from your face,
since the expression is still there.
Your dark eyes are still apon me,
in dissapointment you stare.

Your abuse gives you pleasure,
and keeps me in lost hopes.
One day you'll have an end with me,
and I'll be the one to tie the rope...

Copyright © shattered_heart ... [ 2004-11-22 19:11:22]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Just Another Hit (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 07:38:26 PM AEST
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this one really makes you think. I say leave is stupid butt.

Re: Just Another Hit (User Rating: 1 )
by Rxqueen on Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 06:29:45 AM AEST
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Wow, very good write. My friend Annie was in an abusive relationship for four years and was sent to the hospital a few times. It started out with a hit here or there and ended in him locking her in the bedroom naked for awhole day then trying to kill her. Luckily her friend came over since she hadn't heard from her and called to cops. he is in jail now but she still goes and sees him. End it before you become like her, please. But back to the peice, very well written.

Re: Just Another Hit (User Rating: 1 )
by Doriens_Picture on Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 09:00:15 PM AEST
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this is a great write but i hate the content i really would kill him if i saw or knew he had done it but that is just me

i am a wall when ppl try and push me around

Re: Just Another Hit (User Rating: 1 )
by Drapes on Monday, 6th March 2006 @ 09:12:33 PM AEST
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Wow, emotional... Great write.
Best of luck to you.
-Drapes

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