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Array ( [sid] => 72723 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => It's a Pity I'm Not Dead [time] => 2004-11-22 17:13:12 [hometext] => It really is a pity that I'm not dead [bodytext] => I lie on the floor my head hurts
I've lost all hope of breathing
I'm broken again my world is blurry
I touch my head it's bleeding

The doors are closed the windows are shut
The light refuses to come in
And I don't blame it my life sucks
I'm going to try it again

My first attempt backfired as usual
I ended up passing out
And here I lie on the hard cold floor
Watching my blood leak out

I want to die I've tried many times
Every attempt has failed
Or maybe I'm just a coward one wiht no backbone
Maybe the fear has me impaled

Slowly I sit up and begin to look around
And try to clear my head
People come into focus I'm not alone after all
I'm picked up and thrown on the bed

A question is asked and I turn around
I start to pound him in the head
But I keep my cool and slowly I answer
"It's a pity I'm not dead" [comments] => 4 [counter] => 197 [topic] => 13 [informant] => upomik [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

It's a Pity I'm Not Dead

Contributed by upomik on Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 05:13:12 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I lie on the floor my head hurts
I've lost all hope of breathing
I'm broken again my world is blurry
I touch my head it's bleeding

The doors are closed the windows are shut
The light refuses to come in
And I don't blame it my life sucks
I'm going to try it again

My first attempt backfired as usual
I ended up passing out
And here I lie on the hard cold floor
Watching my blood leak out

I want to die I've tried many times
Every attempt has failed
Or maybe I'm just a coward one wiht no backbone
Maybe the fear has me impaled

Slowly I sit up and begin to look around
And try to clear my head
People come into focus I'm not alone after all
I'm picked up and thrown on the bed

A question is asked and I turn around
I start to pound him in the head
But I keep my cool and slowly I answer
"It's a pity I'm not dead"

Copyright © upomik ... [ 2004-11-22 17:13:12]
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Re: It's a Pity I'm Not Dead (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 05:17:46 PM AEST
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sad poem,good one too.

Re: It's a Pity I'm Not Dead (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 05:21:13 PM AEST
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a very sad poem, you are wrong it's not a pity you are not dead. it is a great thing that you are alive *hugs*

pixie xx

Re: It's a Pity I'm Not Dead (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 06:04:16 PM AEST
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My guess is that it isn't God' will for you to die.
Just a guess.
Stitch

Re: It's a Pity I'm Not Dead (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 06:27:23 AM AEST
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Such a moving sad write you did, its so powerfull the way you put it together. i loves the poem

Hugs,
Jane

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