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Array ( [sid] => 72702 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My Reverie (Prelude) [time] => 2004-11-22 15:28:31 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Thoughts of mine, insist to speak
No I say, you'll embarrass me

abandoned intentions scream to act
No I say, stay and wait
she'll come around again
I promise you that

Regretful choices, burn my pride
stop, I say, I cant decide

Time doesn't wait, neither does fate
Stop procrastinating
have some faith

Standing confident, like a man
breaking the silence
taking a chance....

Thoughts escape, intentions let go
She listens, she smiles
she replies, "lets go"

take my hand,as I covers your eyes
"i've got something to show you, quite a surprise"

we stop, I wait, she uncovers my eyes
she stands in front of me
and glances behind

Hold on just a second, please don't peak
its almost here, for you to see
I hear a sound, I feel her shake
she turns and runs, runs away....

Something hits me, throws me to the side
I look and see, oh yes, a surprise
a figure stands, above my head
shakes my body and says..

Wake up, wake up, you didn't take your medicine
you have no choice, in this institution
We have strict rules here my friend
don't obey, you'll face the consequence

...I dreamt of her again tonight
She ran, ran away
I was hit, and thrown to the side
left with thoughts astray....

So I'll take, the medicine which they give
A little more than prescribed
fall asleep, and wait again
for my reverie to come by.
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My Reverie (Prelude)

Contributed by matt73 on Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 03:28:31 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



Thoughts of mine, insist to speak
No I say, you'll embarrass me

abandoned intentions scream to act
No I say, stay and wait
she'll come around again
I promise you that

Regretful choices, burn my pride
stop, I say, I cant decide

Time doesn't wait, neither does fate
Stop procrastinating
have some faith

Standing confident, like a man
breaking the silence
taking a chance....

Thoughts escape, intentions let go
She listens, she smiles
she replies, "lets go"

take my hand,as I covers your eyes
"i've got something to show you, quite a surprise"

we stop, I wait, she uncovers my eyes
she stands in front of me
and glances behind

Hold on just a second, please don't peak
its almost here, for you to see
I hear a sound, I feel her shake
she turns and runs, runs away....

Something hits me, throws me to the side
I look and see, oh yes, a surprise
a figure stands, above my head
shakes my body and says..

Wake up, wake up, you didn't take your medicine
you have no choice, in this institution
We have strict rules here my friend
don't obey, you'll face the consequence

...I dreamt of her again tonight
She ran, ran away
I was hit, and thrown to the side
left with thoughts astray....

So I'll take, the medicine which they give
A little more than prescribed
fall asleep, and wait again
for my reverie to come by.




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Re: My Reverie (Prelude) (User Rating: 1 )
by freckle on Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 05:55:27 PM AEST
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I like it. Especially the element of surprise when it changes direction....good write!


Re: My Reverie (Prelude) (User Rating: 1 )
by fielding88 on Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 10:25:50 AM AEST
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I absolutely love twists at the end of..well anything. It really throws u off and surprises. This was a sweet poem, and since I read the other poem that kinda goes with this, it was even better. Great read, keep it up.


Re: My Reverie (Prelude) (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 04:27:12 AM AEST
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I very much enjoyed this piece.
It was well organised and sequenced, with tasteful flow and content.
Your wording is modest yet complete with flair.
I am enticed, entirely.




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