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Array ( [sid] => 72671 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Hurting [time] => 2004-11-22 12:18:33 [hometext] => My... ex... boyfriend is going back to his country. We were just starting to really get serious, but, well... [bodytext] =>

Even though our love wasn't that strong,
And even when you're gone
I find I'm torn now that we have to say "so long."
I'm glad our friendship isn't going to be done

I didn't think this would hurt so much.
I mean, we only knew each other for two months.
My heart feels like it's being held up by a crutch.
Never again am I sure we should cross paths

I knew that you would have to go back to Nepal,
Perhaps I was foolish in letting this go so far...
You were the first guy I felt like this for, so I gave it my all
Now I'm wondering if I should have just shoved those feelings into a jar. [comments] => 8 [counter] => 372 [topic] => 61 [informant] => Angelic_Demon [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 28 [ratings] => 6 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )

Hurting

Contributed by Angelic_Demon on Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 12:18:33 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

Even though our love wasn't that strong,
And even when you're gone
I find I'm torn now that we have to say "so long."
I'm glad our friendship isn't going to be done

I didn't think this would hurt so much.
I mean, we only knew each other for two months.
My heart feels like it's being held up by a crutch.
Never again am I sure we should cross paths

I knew that you would have to go back to Nepal,
Perhaps I was foolish in letting this go so far...
You were the first guy I felt like this for, so I gave it my all
Now I'm wondering if I should have just shoved those feelings into a jar.

Copyright © Angelic_Demon ... [ 2004-11-22 12:18:33]
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Re: Hurting (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 12:23:46 PM AEST
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*hugs* I am sorry to hear that, you can't help falling for someone, a very sad, emotional and moving write,

pixie xx

Re: Hurting (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 12:51:31 PM AEST
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I may not have thought much about him, but I am sorry you are hurting, I just wish I could be there for you now, or even have some words of wisdom for you, but love for me is a fantasy that does not exist and so I have nothing helpful to say.

As a poem, I love this and yup, you even managed to rhyme lol. Excellent hun

You're sister
Here for you always
- Becca

Re: Hurting (User Rating: 1 )
by yellow_sundragon on Saturday, 27th November 2004 @ 04:32:57 AM AEST
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Well then. So I never did comment. But I can make up for that!!

I think that it's a great tribute. And Tom thinks that the entire situation is saddening. Awww, and Tom's a guys guy and even he was touched....

I love you, Mara, and no matter what happens now I know, I KNOW, that your sun will always shine later. Because that's no less than you deserve.

x's and o's....
Jaime

Re: Hurting (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 12:47:22 PM AEST
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awww mara, this is beautiful sweetie, its never wrong to love and better that you did and lost than never had; one grows as a person from love, ive not ever heard you cry your heart out like you have lately, but you will find your truelove, this i know babe, hugs n' love mom xxx

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Re: Hurting (User Rating: 1 )
by Silver-Dragonfly on Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 10:43:07 PM AEST
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Mara, this is a beautiful poem and I'm sorry that you're hurting. I wish that I could be there for you more. I hope that you feel better soon.

Take Care,

Lil' Jaime

Re: Hurting (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 01:51:10 PM AEST
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I agree with ladyfawn,
never put your love in a jar...

Live with all your life and love with all your love!

Graet write!

Re: Hurting (User Rating: 1 )
by SharonAngel on Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 06:41:12 PM AEST
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i can feel your pain Mara....i feel like that alot....lost....very good write...keep up the good work....you will be great writer.

Re: Hurting (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 10th May 2009 @ 09:07:17 PM AEST
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It was a good poem. Writing and expressing yourself creatively is always a good way to deal with life's ups and downs. I will keep you in my prayers.

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