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Array ( [sid] => 72623 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => monsters [time] => 2004-11-21 22:58:18 [hometext] => wrote this when i was going through a bit of a rough time........... [bodytext] => all these thoughts run through my mind
i just cant take it anymore
all this silence seems so loud
as i lay upon this floor

shadows close in around me
my fears become so real
all my scars begin to bleed
and this pain becomes too real

but no one seems to notice
the monsters that make me run
and soon im gonna cave it
but baby whats done is done

youve hurt me for the last time
i wont be hurt no more
now with my last breath ill show you
that ive finally evened the score

you will finally regret
all the things youve done
and realise that your the monster
thats causing me to run
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 151 [topic] => 36 [informant] => cinderella88 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

monsters

Contributed by cinderella88 on Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 10:58:18 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

all these thoughts run through my mind
i just cant take it anymore
all this silence seems so loud
as i lay upon this floor

shadows close in around me
my fears become so real
all my scars begin to bleed
and this pain becomes too real

but no one seems to notice
the monsters that make me run
and soon im gonna cave it
but baby whats done is done

youve hurt me for the last time
i wont be hurt no more
now with my last breath ill show you
that ive finally evened the score

you will finally regret
all the things youve done
and realise that your the monster
thats causing me to run

Copyright © cinderella88 ... [ 2004-11-21 22:58:18]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: monsters (User Rating: 1 )
by Jishes_4_ever on Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 11:25:05 PM AEST
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really good write... i'm so sorry this person hurt u... hope u get better soon...

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Re: monsters (User Rating: 1 )
by purity on Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 12:26:14 PM AEST
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life doesn't get harder or easier for those of us gifted with issues .as long as we keep in mind that we are the only ones who can seek justice through healing ourselves and others -regardless of how small or great the crime may be -only then are we innocent. each day we live we are given yet another oppurtunity to shine .

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