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Array ( [sid] => 72619 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A poem about you [time] => 2004-11-21 22:43:47 [hometext] => this poem sucks badly [bodytext] => A more than gorgeous and simple splendor

The world’s most beautiful sight

Full of color like an aurora that you should never hide

To journey in them would be a great endeavor

I know it could last more than a lifetime more than forever

To really understand who you really are

I would walk the path in your eyes no matter how far

I am always in your grace always finding what I need in your face
So beautiful and kind always wanting to make you mine
You are more than just a messed up girl you are my entire world
You are more than gorgeous so beautiful beyond all words you I will always adore
I know what I have with you and I will never give up something so true
I will never ever hurt you never ever treat you like dirt and leave you
I love you more than I could ever say and I will never ever stray

By you my angel I have been saved

More than twice blessed I have been made

To feel like I am complete

And you have given my heart a new reason to beat

To see this world in a brand new way

To search the world and better my days

Never again will I walk the streets and never

Will I feel like have to give in to defeat
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 221 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Doriens_Picture [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
A poem about you

Contributed by Doriens_Picture on Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 10:43:47 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



A more than gorgeous and simple splendor

The world’s most beautiful sight

Full of color like an aurora that you should never hide

To journey in them would be a great endeavor

I know it could last more than a lifetime more than forever

To really understand who you really are

I would walk the path in your eyes no matter how far

I am always in your grace always finding what I need in your face
So beautiful and kind always wanting to make you mine
You are more than just a messed up girl you are my entire world
You are more than gorgeous so beautiful beyond all words you I will always adore
I know what I have with you and I will never give up something so true
I will never ever hurt you never ever treat you like dirt and leave you
I love you more than I could ever say and I will never ever stray

By you my angel I have been saved

More than twice blessed I have been made

To feel like I am complete

And you have given my heart a new reason to beat

To see this world in a brand new way

To search the world and better my days

Never again will I walk the streets and never

Will I feel like have to give in to defeat




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Re: A poem about you (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 11:01:46 PM AEST
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beautiful and amazing. if only my poems sucked as badly as you say this does.


Re: A poem about you (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 11:41:05 PM AEST
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No sucks, my friend. It's a great write.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy


Re: A poem about you (User Rating: 1 )
by mylastwords on Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 01:51:02 AM AEST
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hey,

It's beautiful as always. It so does not suck! Keep writing. Talk to you soon.

Luv Jade xxooxx




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