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[aid] => mick
[title] => After dark on Thursday
[time] => 2004-11-21 22:00:17
[hometext] => Thanks to my friend after dark for the idea for the title and for a start on this poem that has taken me a few days to finish writing this is just a short poem its really not about anyone
[bodytext] => After dark on Thursday After a walk in the park on a rainy day We went to the museum to stare through the telescope at the stars Our constellations are really close to each other this time of year We were really high up and looking down at the park Tracing with our fingers the path we had taken only hours ago It was cold and wet out so I held you in my arms to keep you warm It started to rain but we did not care it was as if not one drop fell on us We held each other and kissed till it started to thunder so we ran inside I got a blanket from the closet of the museum and wrapped you in it It was very cold so I went to the vending machine and got some warm coco for us Then we sat by the large glass doors and watched the rain fall over everything We must have been there for two hours or so when I looked at my watch it was already two am Finally the rain stopped long enough for us to run back through the park to get to my car When there I turned the heater on at low just to keep us warm enough We talked for a while about astronomy and about our lives We could have talked for hours but the trip to your house was only half We got to your house and I was about to kiss you goodnight and you said Why not kiss me good morning instead and spend the night with me How could I resist an invitation from a girl like you? So you opened the door and we went in We took off our shoes and slowly Tipp toed on the carpeted floor up the stair case to your room We had to be so quiet not to wake you parents even though they did like us going out together it was still very late We went into your room and locked the door behind us and the rest of that night will just be between us But in all of its completion that was the greatest night of my whole life and was that only because I spent it with you [comments] => 2 [counter] => 204 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Doriens_Picture [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
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