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Array ( [sid] => 7260 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Somebody help me [time] => 2002-11-22 13:00:00 [hometext] => i wrote this one day in school. thats where i write most of my poems. i have alot of time to think there. [bodytext] => somebody help me
i dont know what to do
somebody help me
i try not to think about you
somebody help me
im starting to lose my mind
somebody help me
youre so hard to find
somebody help me
i have gotten lost
somebody help me
you never leave my thought
somebody help me
your not here to help me now
somebody help me
me love you? i still wonder how
somebody help me
i dont know what to do
somebody help me
i try not to think about you
somebody help
cant any of them see
i really truly need
somebody to please help me [comments] => 3 [counter] => 180 [topic] => 21 [informant] => me_n_me_alone [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

Somebody help me

Contributed by me_n_me_alone on Friday, 22nd November 2002 @ 01:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

somebody help me
i dont know what to do
somebody help me
i try not to think about you
somebody help me
im starting to lose my mind
somebody help me
youre so hard to find
somebody help me
i have gotten lost
somebody help me
you never leave my thought
somebody help me
your not here to help me now
somebody help me
me love you? i still wonder how
somebody help me
i dont know what to do
somebody help me
i try not to think about you
somebody help
cant any of them see
i really truly need
somebody to please help me

Copyright Â© me_n_me_alone ... [ 2002-11-22 13:00:00]
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Re: Somebody help me (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Friday, 22nd November 2002 @ 02:50:52 PM AEST
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Well this has it's own style, it's
beautiful and yet so sad. Thanks
for sharing it . Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.

Re: Somebody help me (User Rating: 1 )
by angelrae on Tuesday, 3rd December 2002 @ 11:41:05 AM AEST
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This is truly a poem of the heart. Each one of us can feel the pain you write. We must admit our pain before our pain can heal. This poem, I am sure can touch so many people as it has touched me. Thank you for sharing your heart and thoughts. So beautiful is this poem

Re: Somebody help me (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 12th March 2003 @ 03:50:25 PM AEST
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i had been here ... angel / teddy

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