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Array ( [sid] => 72572 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => If I Were Gino Smooth [time] => 2004-11-21 16:53:53 [hometext] => I went to the club the other night, and I had a good time... but I noticed all those other guys just hanging, all these beautiful women and they're by themselves. I used to be like that, probably still am... but I love it now. [bodytext] => If I were Gino Smooth,
The doors would open by themselves,
the bouncers would want to shake my hand.
The bartenders would know my name.

If I were Gino Smooth,
The house would pay for me,
happy in the fact that I had come.
The owner would come and sit with me.

If I were Gino Smooth,
I would look at the most beautiful woman there,
and she would look at me.
There's no way she could say no.

If I were Gino Smooth,
Everyone would stand off to the side,
and I would do my dance.
And then... applause.

If I were Gino Smooth,
I'd take the underdog,
Make him feel like the top.
He would get the second most beautiful woman there.

I'm not Gino Smooth,
But if I were... I'd be happy being Gino Smooth,
just like I'm happy being me.
Only smoother.

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If I Were Gino Smooth

Contributed by Aquaelius on Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 04:53:53 PM in AEST
Topic: fantasy

If I were Gino Smooth,
The doors would open by themselves,
the bouncers would want to shake my hand.
The bartenders would know my name.

If I were Gino Smooth,
The house would pay for me,
happy in the fact that I had come.
The owner would come and sit with me.

If I were Gino Smooth,
I would look at the most beautiful woman there,
and she would look at me.
There's no way she could say no.

If I were Gino Smooth,
Everyone would stand off to the side,
and I would do my dance.
And then... applause.

If I were Gino Smooth,
I'd take the underdog,
Make him feel like the top.
He would get the second most beautiful woman there.

I'm not Gino Smooth,
But if I were... I'd be happy being Gino Smooth,
just like I'm happy being me.
Only smoother.

Copyright © Aquaelius ... [ 2004-11-21 16:53:53]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: If I Were Gino Smooth (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 05:01:51 PM AEST
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lol. nice. Smooth, even.

Keep writing.

Re: If I Were Gino Smooth (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 05:23:29 PM AEST
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Very creative thinking and writing. It also has a humerous side.
Luv your positive attitude.
Awesomely written.
a masterpeice.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy
Well with your pen I have a feeling u could still get the most beautifull one in the house but remember beauty is only skin deep.

Re: If I Were Gino Smooth (User Rating: 1 )
by Oriana on Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 07:10:47 PM AEST
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lol....I love this poem. It's just brighten my day!!!. ^_^ Thankyou sooo much for writing it!
*Gives you a big cookie*
Oriana

Re: If I Were Gino Smooth (User Rating: 1 )
by Rxqueen on Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 05:35:03 AM AEST
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I liked this. If you are Gino smoothe, can I come out with you. I want the house to pay for me too!!!!!!

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