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Array ( [sid] => 72547 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Best Friends, There for you [time] => 2004-11-21 14:08:22 [hometext] => Very simple, yet effective. [bodytext] => 1)There for you
When ever u feel you need a friend,
When things get rough a hand to lend,
When hearts get broken,will help to mend.
Wholl stand by you until the end.
When ever u feel your on your own,
Ill be right here, your not alone.

2)Best friends
We've spent times both good and bad
Standing side by side.
You cheered me up when i was sad gave me your shoulder when i cried
Youve been there for me through best and worst no matter what i do
Just a poem to let you know that im always here for you

By Shane C
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Best Friends, There for you

Contributed by vexotos on Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 02:08:22 PM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry

1)There for you
When ever u feel you need a friend,
When things get rough a hand to lend,
When hearts get broken,will help to mend.
Wholl stand by you until the end.
When ever u feel your on your own,
Ill be right here, your not alone.

2)Best friends
We've spent times both good and bad
Standing side by side.
You cheered me up when i was sad gave me your shoulder when i cried
Youve been there for me through best and worst no matter what i do
Just a poem to let you know that im always here for you

By Shane C

Copyright © vexotos ... [ 2004-11-21 14:08:22]
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Re: Best Friends, There for you (User Rating: 1 )
by a_bear on Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 02:16:13 PM AEST
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I loved the thoughts and the poetry itself..If it were me, I might re-arrange some of the longer lines..like this:

You cheered me up when i was sad
gave me your shoulder when i cried
Youve been there for me
through best and worst no matter what i do
Just a poem to let you know
that im always here for you

It's just a suggestion..sometimes it allows the reader to
see the rhyme more clearly..
good job though..

Re: Best Friends, There for you (User Rating: 1 )
by neglected1 on Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 02:16:48 PM AEST
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you were right about the short but effective part... its so wonderful to have a friend so caring as one that you have written about.. i really enjoyed ready this and it made me wonder why everyone couldnt be like this..

great write

~neglected1~

Re: Best Friends, There for you (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 02:45:45 PM AEST
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Very powerfull deep write.
A masterpeice to the beauty of a true friend.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy

Re: Best Friends, There for you (User Rating: 1 )
by Dusty on Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 02:54:58 PM AEST
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You were right, simple, but effective. I like alot.
~Dusty~

Re: Best Friends, There for you (User Rating: 1 )
by Davina on Saturday, 27th November 2004 @ 04:42:09 PM AEST
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Amazing, simply amazing. I was in teats reading that cuz my best mate slept with my sister a few weeks ago and that wa really touchin shane cheers
XXx

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