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Array ( [sid] => 72544 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Closer than Ever [time] => 2004-11-21 13:24:16 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Maybe it's only my fear
To expose to others these tears

Tonight I am closer than ever
to suicide
That I think I will heal never
but I'm afraid to say good-bye

I wonder when will I die
I hope that it will be tonight

I am a pitiful loser
hopeless and meaningless
Dare I abuse her?
she thinks she's better than me, than this

I hate my life
I just stare at the sky and cry

Bloody tears and bloody veins
death lingering
A feeling so helpful, yet so strange
suicide singing

The end of my life...
...on the phone...
...ringing... [comments] => 3 [counter] => 199 [topic] => 36 [informant] => Nezenic [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Closer than Ever

Contributed by Nezenic on Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 01:24:16 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

Maybe it's only my fear
To expose to others these tears

Tonight I am closer than ever
to suicide
That I think I will heal never
but I'm afraid to say good-bye

I wonder when will I die
I hope that it will be tonight

I am a pitiful loser
hopeless and meaningless
Dare I abuse her?
she thinks she's better than me, than this

I hate my life
I just stare at the sky and cry

Bloody tears and bloody veins
death lingering
A feeling so helpful, yet so strange
suicide singing

The end of my life...
...on the phone...
...ringing...

Copyright © Nezenic ... [ 2004-11-21 13:24:16]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Closer than Ever (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 01:42:13 PM AEST
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Very sad but u exspress your feelings well.
Hang tuff, my friend.
I know it's hard in life but it's easy to die. Choose life as all life isn't bad.
I will put u in my prayers and pray this is jus very convencing writting.
If u need a friend p.m. me any time.
luv, huggs, faith, hope,
emy

Re: Closer than Ever (User Rating: 1 )
by DeadInside on Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 05:53:29 PM AEST
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very sad, but well written, i like it because i can relate to it.

-Autumn-

Re: Closer than Ever (User Rating: 1 )
by a_bear on Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 05:54:42 PM AEST
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hopefully this is just venting..if not; I almost died after a suicide attempt. I feel unwanted and useless..ugly and low..but when I saw the devastation that I nearly left behind..my neighbor had to clean up the blood even though I did it in the tub and tried to be clean about it..there was a mess left. My grandchildren saw my naked bleeding body carried out..they were traumatized and feel guilt to this day.. so it's a very selfish thing to do.. Don't give in to self pity.. there is a better way and writing like you are doing is one way.. good job because I feel your pain.. keep reaching out.

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