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Array ( [sid] => 72507 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => TRY TRY TRY [time] => 2004-11-21 02:23:14 [hometext] => i wrote this because i realized that when my ex and i would fight over little stupid fears i had that he did love me he just didn't know how to show me [bodytext] => OUR LAST NIGHT IN LOVE,
WE STOOD FACE TO FACE,
I WAS CRYING AND FOR ONCE YOU WERE TRYING.
WE HAD FOUGHT THAT NIGHT LIKE WE NEVER HAD BEFORE,
NOW ITS ALL JUST ONE NIGHT, AND NOW WE'RE APART,
NOT FOR THIS FIGHT WE HAD, BUT OVER SOMETHING MUCH MUCH MORE SAD,
YOU KNEW I LOVED YOU DEEPER THAN ANY OTHER LOVE COULD,
I TRIED AND TRIED BUT NEVER REALLY UNDERSTOOD,
THAT YOU WERE TRYING ALL THE WHILE, WHILE I WAS LIVIN IN FEAR,
NOW THE ONLY WORDS I WANT YOU TO HEAR IS I'M SORRY FOR
SORRY FOR NOT BEING THE WOMAN I SHOULD OF.
NOT BEING THERE FOR YOU WHEN YOU TRIED TO MAKE ME SEE,
THAT THE ONE YOU LOVED WAS ME.
BUT NOW ITS ALL JUST WHAT USED TO BE,
AND NOW WHAT USED TO MAKE ME HAPPY
I MISS MUCH MORE THAN I NEVER KNEW I COULD,
I MISS YOU FIGHTING WITH ME,
BECAUSE FIGHTING MADE ME SEE,
THAT YOU REALLY DID CARE.
MAYBE IT WAS ME WHO REALLY WASN'T THERE.
BUT NOW I PROMISE YOU THIS,
AS TRUE AS YOUR NAME ON MY LIPS
I CAN DO NOTHING BUT TRY
TRY NOT TO CRY IF YOU FORGET TO CALL,
TRY NOT TO GET ANGRY IF YOU WANT TO BE WITH YOUR FRIENDS.
PUT THIS PROMISE CAN ONLY BE MADE,
IF YOU COME BACK TO ME AND TRY TO BE THERE MORE THAN WHEN WE FIGHT.
BECAUSE FIGHTING DON'T MAKE ANYTHING RIGHT,
BUT LOVE ME THE WAY YOU KNOW HOW,
ONE DAY WE WILL GET THIS RIGHT
IF WE LEARN TO TALK AND NOT TO FIGHT.
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TRY TRY TRY

Contributed by brokenwings on Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 02:23:14 AM in AEST
Topic: ApologyPoetry

OUR LAST NIGHT IN LOVE,
WE STOOD FACE TO FACE,
I WAS CRYING AND FOR ONCE YOU WERE TRYING.
WE HAD FOUGHT THAT NIGHT LIKE WE NEVER HAD BEFORE,
NOW ITS ALL JUST ONE NIGHT, AND NOW WE'RE APART,
NOT FOR THIS FIGHT WE HAD, BUT OVER SOMETHING MUCH MUCH MORE SAD,
YOU KNEW I LOVED YOU DEEPER THAN ANY OTHER LOVE COULD,
I TRIED AND TRIED BUT NEVER REALLY UNDERSTOOD,
THAT YOU WERE TRYING ALL THE WHILE, WHILE I WAS LIVIN IN FEAR,
NOW THE ONLY WORDS I WANT YOU TO HEAR IS I'M SORRY FOR
SORRY FOR NOT BEING THE WOMAN I SHOULD OF.
NOT BEING THERE FOR YOU WHEN YOU TRIED TO MAKE ME SEE,
THAT THE ONE YOU LOVED WAS ME.
BUT NOW ITS ALL JUST WHAT USED TO BE,
AND NOW WHAT USED TO MAKE ME HAPPY
I MISS MUCH MORE THAN I NEVER KNEW I COULD,
I MISS YOU FIGHTING WITH ME,
BECAUSE FIGHTING MADE ME SEE,
THAT YOU REALLY DID CARE.
MAYBE IT WAS ME WHO REALLY WASN'T THERE.
BUT NOW I PROMISE YOU THIS,
AS TRUE AS YOUR NAME ON MY LIPS
I CAN DO NOTHING BUT TRY
TRY NOT TO CRY IF YOU FORGET TO CALL,
TRY NOT TO GET ANGRY IF YOU WANT TO BE WITH YOUR FRIENDS.
PUT THIS PROMISE CAN ONLY BE MADE,
IF YOU COME BACK TO ME AND TRY TO BE THERE MORE THAN WHEN WE FIGHT.
BECAUSE FIGHTING DON'T MAKE ANYTHING RIGHT,
BUT LOVE ME THE WAY YOU KNOW HOW,
ONE DAY WE WILL GET THIS RIGHT
IF WE LEARN TO TALK AND NOT TO FIGHT.

Copyright © brokenwings ... [ 2004-11-21 02:23:14]
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