Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	29-May 21:15:05 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

Array ( [sid] => 72468 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Never Be Through With You [time] => 2004-11-20 20:27:02 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Today was a good day, but I am just as lonely tonight,
Thinking about the last time things really felt right.
Up in the clouds was I, to be sheltered by your arms,
Falling back down here to Earth has hit me oh so hard.
My world is incomplete without the happiness I withdrew
Though I said it was over, I will never be through with you.

The bright fire in my eyes has so quickly faded to gray,
The temperature within my heart, of the coldest December day.
I walk these floors a prisoner knowing I built this cage myself
I cannot lay the blame of our demise on you or anybody else.
Even as I was leaving, deep inside of me I knew
I could say it was over, but I will never be through with you.

I will carry on with my old life because it is what I am supposed to do-
I will let you believe it is over, however cruel,
But I will never be through with you.
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 190 [topic] => 21 [informant] => juliETTE [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

Never Be Through With You

Contributed by juliETTE on Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 08:27:02 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Today was a good day, but I am just as lonely tonight,
Thinking about the last time things really felt right.
Up in the clouds was I, to be sheltered by your arms,
Falling back down here to Earth has hit me oh so hard.
My world is incomplete without the happiness I withdrew
Though I said it was over, I will never be through with you.

The bright fire in my eyes has so quickly faded to gray,
The temperature within my heart, of the coldest December day.
I walk these floors a prisoner knowing I built this cage myself
I cannot lay the blame of our demise on you or anybody else.
Even as I was leaving, deep inside of me I knew
I could say it was over, but I will never be through with you.

I will carry on with my old life because it is what I am supposed to do-
I will let you believe it is over, however cruel,
But I will never be through with you.

Copyright © juliETTE ... [ 2004-11-20 20:27:02]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: Never Be Through With You (User Rating: 1 )
by girlg0newrong on Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 09:21:06 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Great write, I liked it.

Re: Never Be Through With You (User Rating: 1 )
by LEMMEN on Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 09:28:16 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

So much sadness so much pain my this one that hurt you know. You are a great person indeed. Just by the you write I can tell you will be a great person. WELL WRITTEN WORDS.

~~DENNIS~~

Re: Never Be Through With You (User Rating: 1 )
by iodinelove on Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 09:43:01 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

I like december. I like gray days ^_^
love is a cage, and, as my two lil dogs just did, we sometimes walk into cages knowingly; life is about taking risks, and love is the greatest risk to take. Even dying is less painful...which is a wonder why everyone is so afraid of it?!
I like it.....but i keep hitting tab...which will one day drive me insane.....keep up the feeling^_^

Re: Never Be Through With You (User Rating: 1 )
by Always on Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 08:19:45 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Awesome....felt that...*s*

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com