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In the utmost darkness lifts senses to the sky
Each verb clashed liked waves in anticipation from the sea
Increasing temperatures with a wink of an eye

A night of a million candles elope my mind
Blind to all points of referrence but serene
Consciously asleep but completely aware and wild
In a spin of no affectionate measure for dreams

Will you dance on top of water tonight with me?
I will protect you from violent waves that crash over our feet
Leave all the ideals of what we use to be
And take in the magnectic air as we meet

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The sound of sounds

Contributed by danimus on Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 02:30:54 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

The sound of sounds made silently
In the utmost darkness lifts senses to the sky
Each verb clashed liked waves in anticipation from the sea
Increasing temperatures with a wink of an eye

A night of a million candles elope my mind
Blind to all points of referrence but serene
Consciously asleep but completely aware and wild
In a spin of no affectionate measure for dreams

Will you dance on top of water tonight with me?
I will protect you from violent waves that crash over our feet
Leave all the ideals of what we use to be
And take in the magnectic air as we meet

Copyright © danimus ... [ 2004-11-20 14:30:54]
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Re: The sound of sounds (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 02:44:19 PM AEST
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this is so beautiful. i especially like the final stanza.

Re: The sound of sounds (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 12:10:43 AM AEST
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I like this a lot. Get the spelling errors out of there and I could see it even being published. Your images are those of emotion and very appealing. Cheers!

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