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Array ( [sid] => 72371 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Insanity [time] => 2004-11-20 05:16:50 [hometext] => When mental pain become physical pain and is too unclear to describe... [bodytext] => Awkward sensation through my veins
Heavy on my chest
Rushing through, inflicting pain
I pause, unable to describe this mess

Moving up, towards my sight
This fire burns my eyes
Tears flow out with all their might,
I call them, "silent cries"

This is the Outcome of my life
Lost wondering where I am
I won't move towards that shining light,
Since I'm sure it's just another scam

Dangling in between wrong and right,
Not knowing which way to turn
Sad memories, I try to fight
But they resist and then return

Thoughts are jumbled in my head
Convincing me to "try insane"
Then they switch to "no, try dead!"
And I wonder if all in life is just the same

Dhabia Al Bayaty
October 8,2004 [comments] => 11 [counter] => 713 [topic] => 48 [informant] => Dhabia [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Insanity

Contributed by Dhabia on Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 05:16:50 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Awkward sensation through my veins
Heavy on my chest
Rushing through, inflicting pain
I pause, unable to describe this mess

Moving up, towards my sight
This fire burns my eyes
Tears flow out with all their might,
I call them, "silent cries"

This is the Outcome of my life
Lost wondering where I am
I won't move towards that shining light,
Since I'm sure it's just another scam

Dangling in between wrong and right,
Not knowing which way to turn
Sad memories, I try to fight
But they resist and then return

Thoughts are jumbled in my head
Convincing me to "try insane"
Then they switch to "no, try dead!"
And I wonder if all in life is just the same

Dhabia Al Bayaty
October 8,2004

Copyright © Dhabia ... [ 2004-11-20 05:16:50]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Insanity (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 05:36:59 AM AEST
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This is really good, very imotional write. Thanks for sharing and welcome to YPDC

Hugs,
Jane

Re: Insanity (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 05:59:08 AM AEST
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Brilliant. Beautiful and heart-wrenchingly sad at the same time. I hope things get better for you soon. Very well written

Take Care
- Becca

Re: Insanity (User Rating: 1 )
by Dhabia on Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 06:14:58 AM AEST
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Thank you girls, for the nice feedback...
I guess its women who feel my pain :)
In any case,
I'm glad I found this venting site
this is where i'll release my pain
this is where ill end my fight
and this is where ill remain

and freely say im sad
this is how ill start to smile
and slowly i'll avoid "mad"
and ill finally sort out my "dont you understand" file

Re: Insanity (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 06:41:11 AM AEST
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^^^ oops typo in my comment, i meant to say emotional lol.

Re: Insanity (User Rating: 1 )
by LEMMEN on Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 07:33:23 AM AEST
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Insanity. So many times we all ask the question. Am i insane thoughts and images rush through our minds. This is a very deep and emotiolal write. "GREAT JOB" Keep writing Keep up the fight. It helps to heal .

~DENNIS~

Re: Insanity (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 07:42:11 AM AEST
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Wonderfully done....
Welcome to YPDC.....the best poetry site on the net....
Jenni

Re: Insanity (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 08:19:51 AM AEST
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yes welcome to ypdc *hugs* such a powerful and emotional write,

pixie xx

Re: Insanity (User Rating: 1 )
by lunartune on Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 09:26:28 AM AEST
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Really good. A sad write, but a good poem. Love the emotion. Hope you feel better.

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