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[sid] => 72367
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[aid] => mick
[title] => Hold on?
[time] => 2004-11-20 03:44:17
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[bodytext] => ..you.. won't ever.. hear of me again. ..are you *'*** happy? Look what you've.. ..made me do. Cut my life short.. Take my breath. All with this single blade.. Utter nonsense. I.. talk.. in.. a shouting.. tone.. there's nothing you could ever do.. ..to make me not feel alone. the one I *'*** LOVE.. hates me. ..so, there's no point in holding on... ..to this slipping grip on reality. ..because, without YOU.. I'm nothing. ..without you here.. I'm fading.. and I might as well.. ..quit.. before I hurt.. more than.. I do.. now. These tears show I'm still living.. these fears of change show I'm still breathing. my heart's beating.. and It's reassuring. ..but, as the time passes.. I still miss you. ..you're still all I can think about.. everyday. ALL I WANTED IN LIFE.. was to be held.. ..and loved.. by .. you. ..and now, you're GONE.. forever.. and there's not a damn thing I can do to change that. I'm coming, god, so.. please.. take me in, under your wing.. ..and show me how to live again. I hate not.. being with you.. why'd you have to leave? I don't think I quite got the point of this absense. ..so, I take this.. blade.. and.. this.. wrist.. ..and put both together.. ..the blood flows thick and the blade is trembling. ..fear strikes.. and you walk through the door. "It's all a big mistake.." ..I'm gone, like you were.. I'm gone forever, like you were. I'm dead.. forever.. ..and all I can say, is I'm sorry for everything. ..I'm sorry for crying every night, over you. I'm sorry for caring.. so.. god damn much. I'm sorry for loving you, with all of my soul.. ..so, please, don't let this discourage you.. ..from shattering another heart. ..so, now, you can go start.. another life. without me.. don't hold on. There's no point. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 220 [topic] => 36 [informant] => Silentpwn [notes] => moderaator 9 11/20/04 bleep words [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 6 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
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