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What I want to be
Sweet
What I wish I was
Friendly
What I know I'm not
Loved
What I really want to be
Especially by my family
I wish I was pretty sweet friendly and loved
But it's something that you are once more above
Many people are all and some may not be
But no one is as bad as me [comments] => 4 [counter] => 157 [topic] => 43 [informant] => unlovedchild [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

What

Contributed by unlovedchild on Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 02:16:26 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

Pretty
What I want to be
Sweet
What I wish I was
Friendly
What I know I'm not
Loved
What I really want to be
Especially by my family
I wish I was pretty sweet friendly and loved
But it's something that you are once more above
Many people are all and some may not be
But no one is as bad as me

Copyright © unlovedchild ... [ 2004-11-20 02:16:26]
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Re: What (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 06:23:07 AM AEST
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Aww this is really a nice write, its short but it gets the message across.

Hugs,
Jane

Re: What (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 11:57:55 AM AEST
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this is a short and powerful write.. maybe you just think that .. we here on ypdc care about you.. your a great person.. and i hope you feel better

peace and hope
JENNI

Re: What (User Rating: 1 )
by assassinatorgirl on Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 09:53:08 PM AEST
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great poem, but i'm worse than you so bleh =P *sticks tongue out*

Re: What (User Rating: 1 )
by Drapes on Tuesday, 7th March 2006 @ 09:17:22 PM AEST
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Wow, you're so much better than you think you are, just look at your work! I, too, feel this way a lot of the time. Anyone who pus you down isn't worth your time and isn't worth listening to. Best of luck to you!
-Drapes

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