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Array ( [sid] => 72360 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Candle Light [time] => 2004-11-20 02:14:30 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Illuminated
In the candle light
I see your body shiver,
I kiss your face
then I taste your flow...
In a daze
love to feel this way,
something is coming
something unknown
explodes
and all I can do is moan.

Holding your hand
I feel you start to shake,
a soft O flows
rainbows form
as our love melts
and becomes a river...
our bodies merge
and become one
a perfect moment in time,
a lasting tenderness
sweet bliss
vivid visions
as we ride into the night.

In the window
the candle light
slowly fades,
we lay by the fire
and softly moan...
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Candle Light

Contributed by secretwind on Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 02:14:30 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Illuminated
In the candle light
I see your body shiver,
I kiss your face
then I taste your flow...
In a daze
love to feel this way,
something is coming
something unknown
explodes
and all I can do is moan.

Holding your hand
I feel you start to shake,
a soft O flows
rainbows form
as our love melts
and becomes a river...
our bodies merge
and become one
a perfect moment in time,
a lasting tenderness
sweet bliss
vivid visions
as we ride into the night.

In the window
the candle light
slowly fades,
we lay by the fire
and softly moan...

Copyright © secretwind ... [ 2004-11-20 02:14:30]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Candle Light (User Rating: 1 )
by a_bear on Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 02:21:33 AM AEST
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ahhh yes.

Re: Candle Light (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 07:37:54 AM AEST
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There is something mysterious, alluring and sensual when candles are lit. It shades and lightens various parts of our body. Like a hide and see, peek a blue. The skin seems more smooth, the eyes more radiant. I could go on and on.

I LOVED your poem..

Kie

Re: Candle Light (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 08:21:57 AM AEST
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simply beautiful write,

pixie xx

Re: Candle Light (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 04:29:38 PM AEST
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Mercy darlin ya got me moaning now. What can I say, I'm in-luv with your flows.
You can really make a lady's heart drool.
Hot, hot, hot-n- very pasonate.
luv, huggs, longings,
emy
U have me over here day dreaming again.

Re: Candle Light (User Rating: 1 )
by Deathly_Rose on Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 12:35:31 PM AEST
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very vivd imagery, very passionate.
This poem paints a picture within the readers mind, a picture of two humans, becoming as one, as the light from the candle casts shadows among the room.
Great write.
keep up the good work
*~Alicia~*

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