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Array ( [sid] => 72338 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => It's not a myth... [time] => 2004-11-19 21:34:35 [hometext] => I'm empty inside... [bodytext] => I actually feel pain, deep within my chest,
I gasp and I clutch at my breast,
Actual pain, I never thought it true,
I hurt inside and have nothing to do,
But curl in a ball, and cry till I sleep,
Then dream about the pain as in my dream I weep,
It actually hurts, like a hole inside,
Unlike other pains, this I cannot hide,
It won't stop, it just goes on and through,
I guess a heart being broken is true... [comments] => 5 [counter] => 168 [topic] => 32 [informant] => Unheard_Mute [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

It's not a myth...

Contributed by Unheard_Mute on Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 09:34:35 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

I actually feel pain, deep within my chest,
I gasp and I clutch at my breast,
Actual pain, I never thought it true,
I hurt inside and have nothing to do,
But curl in a ball, and cry till I sleep,
Then dream about the pain as in my dream I weep,
It actually hurts, like a hole inside,
Unlike other pains, this I cannot hide,
It won't stop, it just goes on and through,
I guess a heart being broken is true...

Copyright © Unheard_Mute ... [ 2004-11-19 21:34:35]
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Re: It's not a myth... (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 09:44:47 PM AEST
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another nonsonnet. =] i wrote in a comment eariler that depression and anger burn holes into a person just like a bullet ( you could say a lot of other emotions do that also). emptiness then fills the hole made. well i hope the pain goes away soon, those kind of feelings are some of the worse to go through, but the ones that increase strength the most.

written nicely, even if its not a sonnet =] you held to your rhymes, ::jealous::

Re: It's not a myth... (User Rating: 1 )
by TheVoice on Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 10:01:37 PM AEST
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I feel your pain. It is a very real pain. Sometimes it can be so difficult to deal with. Know that there are others that have experienced this and are here to listen and help if possible.

The Voice

Re: It's not a myth... (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 12:34:50 AM AEST
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This hit me deep I can relate to this all to
much. I hope you can find something that
gives you fulfillment.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: It's not a myth... (User Rating: 1 )
by hoist1atca on Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 01:18:37 AM AEST
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very well written
love has a way of letting you know it is real
you will never be empty inside if you remember the good as wellas the bad
what you feel is another demon of love
seek out the angels of love in your heart
they will help you to surpass this time

Joe

Re: It's not a myth... (User Rating: 1 )
by Tru2Myself on Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 02:31:07 PM AEST
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Oh wow, i know how you feel a broken heart is the worst. but i really love the poem...again your words made me think. and I also like your poem skitzaphrenia (hahah wow spelling error) but you prolly knew that b/c i love like everyone of your poems...maybe i will stop with the comments. I can't help it though. Your work is amazing. How old are you? Your poems make you seem older and wiser but one of them made me think you were 15...so help me out please haha

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