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Array ( [sid] => 72336 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The price for her tears... [time] => 2004-11-19 21:07:03 [hometext] => I'm sorry for this, but I'm angered by the fact that there are those that are forced to endure harassment, and that there's nothing I can do about it... [bodytext] => I'm tired, so tired of all this bull,
A black eye every week, bruise every day,
Poor girl, she doesn't know she loves a tool,
It wasn't her fault, now he has to pay.
Don't say I'm wrong, I was driven to it,
Couldn't take another tear on my shirt,
He had his chance, and didn't care a bit,
She had her turn, now he's got to get hurt.
Her own man hit her, for nothing at all,
Now I am the one that will purge his sin,
The floor met him at a four-story fall,
I was just trying to protect her skin.
He was a fool, and he needed to die,
His life was the price for making you cry... [comments] => 4 [counter] => 161 [topic] => 6 [informant] => Unheard_Mute [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

The price for her tears...

Contributed by Unheard_Mute on Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 09:07:03 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

I'm tired, so tired of all this bull,
A black eye every week, bruise every day,
Poor girl, she doesn't know she loves a tool,
It wasn't her fault, now he has to pay.
Don't say I'm wrong, I was driven to it,
Couldn't take another tear on my shirt,
He had his chance, and didn't care a bit,
She had her turn, now he's got to get hurt.
Her own man hit her, for nothing at all,
Now I am the one that will purge his sin,
The floor met him at a four-story fall,
I was just trying to protect her skin.
He was a fool, and he needed to die,
His life was the price for making you cry...

Copyright © Unheard_Mute ... [ 2004-11-19 21:07:03]
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Re: The price for her tears... (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 09:48:59 PM AEST
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powerful and emotional. harrassment, has anyone ever not gone through it? there are better ways to solve things than violence against yourself and against others though...::doesnt want to get on your bad side and be in a building higher than one story::

Re: The price for her tears... (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 12:31:33 AM AEST
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rad poem. I loved the feel of righteous anger.
I too hate guys that abuse girls the last line
was awesome.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: The price for her tears... (User Rating: 1 )
by waos on Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 07:54:28 PM AEST
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that was good. powerful....

Re: The price for her tears... (User Rating: 1 )
by FlintHunter on Thursday, 1st September 2011 @ 09:37:22 AM AEST
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A very moving and emotionally painful poem about a subject that is so difficult to write about. You are brave to face it with so much strength. Thank you.

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